Dear You - Higurashi english fandub

[RisaPecuu]

:rose ~~Dear You Fandub~~:rose

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Well I decided to make another version of this song, since my old version was pretty......what's the word......NASTY x3 Alot of people have been asking to download my old version of You, but I thought they would like to have a nicer version of the song instead!!! I hope you enjoy, and please critique!! ^-^

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Notes:
-I was all over the place with my pitches. Gomen .__.
-I tried adding harmonics, but I failed terrible. As usual. Sorry .__.
-At times, the backround music was too loud! Grrr I'm such a twit!

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Despite it's flaws, I hope you enjoy!!

~~Dear You on Youtube~~ (http://youtube.com/watch?v=0U0QyBMIFHc)

[RisaPecuu]

Bumping, since I put this up last night :sweat

[Devoted]

So, constructive criticism wise, you were a little pitchy right at the beginning and some of the harmonics were off, as you said. Also, sometimes your voice buzzed in the microphone as if you were too close or something.

Moving on to the positive news =D.

I think you have a really sweet voice! And, though there were times the harmonics and pitch were off, there were also times where I was like 'Good gosh, that's good!!!'. When they did work out (which was several times mostly in the middle and near the end), they sounded beautiful! And I do applaud you for trying harmonics because I know many people (-cough- ME -cough-) just try to avoid that because it's difficult to do, but I think yours worked out nicely for the most part!

This sounded like it was a difficult song to sing since you needed to sing really quickly to keep up with the music. Plus, fandubbing songs in Japanese is hard to begin with just because the music translations are so gosh darn weird the first time you see them and you have to change them to fit the beat and what not and it's just a pain. However, I never had any trouble understanding you and you kept up with the beat very nicely!

I think what may have gotten you a bit pitchy might have been you were pushing your voice out to increase your volume or you were nervous. I'm guessing this because I do that all the time and I come out pitchy, which is frustrating. Perhaps, in your next fandub (for I would like to hear more from you!) choose a slower song or just relax in general so that we can hear your lovely voice.

Overall, a very nice job!

[RisaPecuu]

So, constructive criticism wise, you were a little pitchy right at the beginning and some of the harmonics were off, as you said. Also, sometimes your voice buzzed in the microphone as if you were too close or something.

Moving on to the positive news =D.

I think you have a really sweet voice! And, though there were times the harmonics and pitch were off, there were also times where I was like 'Good gosh, that's good!!!'. When they did work out (which was several times mostly in the middle and near the end), they sounded beautiful! And I do applaud you for trying harmonics because I know many people (-cough- ME -cough-) just try to avoid that because it's difficult to do, but I think yours worked out nicely for the most part!

This sounded like it was a difficult song to sing since you needed to sing really quickly to keep up with the music. Plus, fandubbing songs in Japanese is hard to begin with just because the music translations are so gosh darn weird the first time you see them and you have to change them to fit the beat and what not and it's just a pain. However, I never had any trouble understanding you and you kept up with the beat very nicely!

I think what may have gotten you a bit pitchy might have been you were pushing your voice out to increase your volume or you were nervous. I'm guessing this because I do that all the time and I come out pitchy, which is frustrating. Perhaps, in your next fandub (for I would like to hear more from you!) choose a slower song or just relax in general so that we can hear your lovely voice.

Overall, a very nice job!

Thank you so much for your critique!! And yes you are right--I WAS alittle nevous when I sang it!! I was trying to sound as much as the original as possible and I started getting off beat and lower then I would freak out and go up and and.........well you get the picture :sweat Man I SUCK at harmonics, but I wanna get better at it, so I attempt harmonics anyway!! Haha I know I'm lame :whoops: Oh and thank you for saying my voice is sweet!! x3

[andy ichigo]

This was adorable. The video didn't fit very well though. Depsite some harmony amd volume problems, the lyrics flowed very well. (may i use them? giving full credit to you of course~)

[RisaPecuu]

This was adorable. The video didn't fit very well though. Depsite some harmony amd volume problems, the lyrics flowed very well. (may i use them? giving full credit to you of course~)

Oh sure you could use them!!! Thank you for asking!! ^-^ Oh and I realized I screwed up the video and the music--the music seemed to start faster than it did in my old version......ah well it doesn't matter the main part was the song x3