[Gravitation] Glaring Dream Fandub

[AmyAnn]

I sang this for my friends birthday not long ago and I was pretty happy with the outcome, one of my best songs ever.

I'm dueting a song with him and may be recording tomorrow. I was wondering if anyone would be able to give me areas of improvement so that I don't ruin it for him ^^;

Appreciated greatly

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BgKegvVczDY

Link incase it doesn't work: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BgKegvVczDY

[Fukairi]

the quality is a bit bad, but I suppose you didn't have the instrumental since it sounds like you did one with audacity <3

The pronounciation is a bit off, but I think your voice is liek reaaaaaally pretty :3 I wanna hear you doing ballads <3 with piano <3 aww that would be sweet <3

but I liked this, and I'll stalk you from now on >3

[AmyAnn]

Yeah, my quality sucked on this one -_-

Ballads are something I'm working towards. I'm gonna do my last energetic and upbeat songs them go onto the piano ones. They sounds fun

O_O I'm beginning to wonder if it was a good idea for me to upload this. I have a stalker now? xD lol

Glad you liked it though, and thank you for the critique

[andy ichigo]

I agree with Fukairi, also work on energy. Though it was ok on energy it was a bit flat. Also, be louder next time!! I wanna hear your pretty voice. <333