Star Fox parts 1 & 2 Completed

[Zero]

Staring:

Narrator_Chichiri Miko

Fox McCloud_U-1

Pig Thing_U-1

Slippy Toad_ Manami

Falco Lombardi_Zero

Peppy Hare_Tregatron

Katt_Mizura

Captain Shears_U-1

Blue Cat_Amuro

Ratty Rat_ Tregatron

Gator_Kakeru

Andross_LionelRGuy

Rob the Robot_Amuro

special thanks: Tina Ling for providing Adobe Audition program

Right Click and Save as...

http://www.angelfire.com/super2/sandmanzero0/StarFox_Completed_1a.mp3

http://www.angelfire.com/super2/sandmanzero0/StarFox_Completed_1b.mp3

Intro revision for Chichiri Miko: Right Click save as...

http://www.angelfire.com/super2/sandmanzero0/StarFox_introduction_redo.mp3


View Comic here http://arwing.host.sk/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=3&page=1

Episode 2

Right click and save as...

http://www.angelfire.com/super2/sandmanzero/StarFox_Completed_2a.mp3

http://www.angelfire.com/super2/sandmanzero/StarFox_Completed_2b.mp3

[sparf]

Ok, the opening narration was too quiet or the BGM for it was too loud, so I couldn't understand the narration at all. Also ROB64 seemed drowned out once or twice I think.

The characters were really well portrayed though, and I loved your awesome use of SFX to simulate a dogfight. I could see the SFX Arwings dancing about in the sky in my mind's eye as I listened, to major props for that.

All in all, a good project and a great cast (that I wish I could have been a part of. XD ), and I am eagerly awaiting the next episode so we get to the really juicy stuff.

BTW, I really thought the pronounciation was "An-Drahss" not "An-Drose"

Oh well. AT least it's consistent. ^_^

[Tregster]

k.. here's my review.. ahem..

SFX: State of the art! Very impressive. The arwing dog fight sounds were especially good. I also liked the sound the voices made when talking through the radio.

Music: Really fitted well. I liked the fact that there was theme song in the beginning. ^^

Overall Mixing: Awesome job! My only complaint was that I couldn't really understand the beginning narration. Trying to follow what's happening is sometimes a little tough without reading along with the comic. So, I recommend reading along to get the full effect ^_^

VAs: All the characters were protrayed to a tea. I enjoyed listening to all of you, you're very talented. As for me.. well, there was maybe 2 lines I think should've been delivered different for Peppy. But other than that, it was good I guess ^^ This is the most lines I've had for something that got finished, so I'm quite proud of it ^_^

Overall: A darn good job for your first radio play ^_^ And a wonderful cast ^_^ (I better stop before I run out of positive adjectives lol)

[StNick79]

wow a Star fox rp? how the hell did i miss auditions for this? ohhh there wasnt any? *snaps finger* dammit

so far so good, the narration wasnt too drowned out, but i think it could been used more during battle scenes, just to let u know who's flying where, etc.

voices fit really nice, although Slippy coulda had a lil more energy. He sounded tired during most of his line deliveries and voiced seem strained or something.

HAHAHA the landmaster...DO A BARREL ROLL!!!

a lil name reference of the other characters (Blue Cat, Gator, etc) so that we can tell who's who woulda been nice. im not that familar those guys voices...well Amuro's only cuz he loves Quatre, so i recognized Blue Cat's

all in all good stuff, nice plot. im sure ep2 will be great as well. i like the fact that the sfx were realistic, it gives the atmosphere a much realistic feel than the game (SF 64). but i've heard Star Fox Adventures was more realistic and darker than 64 too.

anyway good job, and cant wait for more. if there's auditions for ep2, i'll keep an eye out. keep it up!

[Chinomi]

I couldn't hear myself very well, but knowing me that was probably my mic's volume XD!

The VA's were VERY talented! And the mixing was SUPERB!!!

[Tregster]

so far so good, the narration wasnt too drowned out, but i think it could been used more during battle scenes, just to let u know who's flying where, etc.

a lil name reference of the other characters (Blue Cat, Gator, etc) so that we can tell who's who woulda been nice. im not that familar those guys voices...well Amuro's only cuz he loves Quatre, so i recognized Blue Cat's




Trying to follow what's happening is sometimes a little tough without reading along with the comic. So, I recommend reading along to get the full effect ^_^


http://arwing.host.sk/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=3&page=1

And um.. we only need like two lines from Amuro for ep 2 to get finished heh. But we havn't been able to contact him due hurricane problems. I hope him and Kakeru are safe.

[Zero]

I also made a revision of the introduction that you can find on the first post or you can just right click and save as here....
http://www.angelfire.com/super2/sandmanzero0/StarFox_introduction_redo.mp3

:o I didnt want the music to drown out the narrator Chichiri Miko so there you go. I didnt realize it at first sorry. ^^;;;;;; Rookie mistake.

Episode 2 is done except for the fact that the page that was missing was posted Sept 19, 2004, and that's really really important to the story line. Amuro and Kakeru are in the "hurricane territory" Florida, so it might take a week or so to get back to them. Judging from the news reports it might be that their internet connection is down because of the fallen power lines or something else. Hopefully nothing bad has happened to them and I wish them the best.

[Musashi]

well Amuro's only cuz he loves Quatre, so i recognized Blue Cat's

Amuro thinks Quatre is a useless pilot, and a wuss.

I thought Kevin did an excellent job bringing this all together. Some of the sound effects and stuff did occasionally drown out some lines, but the sound effects chosen were all excellent. The spacing of some of the lines seemed a little rushed, but aside from that it was all good. I agree that you should read the comic along with the rp to fully enjoy the story.

Keep up the good work Kevin and Jared.

[Zero]

part 2 is complete everyone :)

[StNick79]

well Amuro's only cuz he loves Quatre, so i recognized Blue Cat's

Amuro thinks Quatre is a useless pilot, and a wuss.



lol i meant to say, he was a big fan of Brad Swaille. couldnt think of his name at the time, i just knew he voiced Quatre as well as Amuro. its all good tho

[Zero]

well Amuro's only cuz he loves Quatre, so i recognized Blue Cat's

Amuro thinks Quatre is a useless pilot, and a wuss.

I thought Kevin did an excellent job bringing this all together. Some of the sound effects and stuff did occasionally drown out some lines, but the sound effects chosen were all excellent. The spacing of some of the lines seemed a little rushed, but aside from that it was all good. I agree that you should read the comic along with the rp to fully enjoy the story.

Yep I did rush a lot of it mainly because my computer repeatedly crash while I was making it lol. Every line and every sound I put on the track I saved right after I put it down...but sometimes I forgot to save it :x Then I had to do it all over agian. It was seriously frustrating, but I never gave up on it. But when the computer crashed... :rar I was glad I put everything on a cd :)

Thanks for the comments everybody, Im thinking about getting an animator to animate this for me.

[Tregster]

Thanks for the comments everybody, Im thinking about getting an animator to animate this for me.

Holy crap, that would be so friggin awesome! 8)

[Sukisho]

Wow that was amazing.

[Zero]

90% of it was the sound program 150% was the cast 1,000% was the audience :o


:arrow: YOU CAN'T GO OVER A 100% DOES NOT COMPUTE! ******* [calculator explodes!]

:) heh heh stupid computer

[Radiant Paws]

:shock: CRAP! WHY didn't I comment?!?!? I love Star Fox and believe me, I listened to the whole thing and read the comic and the same time!!!! Matter of fact, I think it's twitce I've listened to part 1.

The Sound effects were one of the best I've ever heard, like the dogfighting and the sword duel between Shears and Fox. WHERE did you get those?!!?? :shock: I also admired the music. And the music!!

VA: My favs were probably Capt. Shears (handsome imo, especially at the start), Peppy and Slippy (he was cute). Of course Fox - he's this young and fresh pilot. And Kat too!


Where's the Dinosaurplanet comic?

~Sigh~ :P

[Zero]

:shock: CRAP! WHY didn't I comment?!?!? I love Star Fox and believe me, I listened to the whole thing and read the comic and the same time!!!! Matter of fact, I think it's twitce I've listened to part 1.

The Sound effects were one of the best I've ever heard, like the dogfighting and the sword duel between Shears and Fox. WHERE did you get those?!!?? :shock: I also admired the music. And the music!!

VA: My favs were probably Capt. Shears (handsome imo, especially at the start), Peppy and Slippy (he was cute). Of course Fox - he's this young and fresh pilot. And Kat too!


Where's the Dinosaurplanet comic?

~Sigh~ :P


:o Hey Thanks! Im amazed that this got a response after all this time. Thanks for listening! ^_^

[Radiant Paws]

:shock: CRAP! WHY didn't I comment?!?!? I love Star Fox and believe me, I listened to the whole thing and read the comic and the same time!!!! Matter of fact, I think it's twitce I've listened to part 1.

The Sound effects were one of the best I've ever heard, like the dogfighting and the sword duel between Shears and Fox. WHERE did you get those?!!?? :shock: I also admired the music. And the music!!

VA: My favs were probably Capt. Shears (handsome imo, especially at the start), Peppy and Slippy (he was cute). Of course Fox - he's this young and fresh pilot. And Kat too!


Where's the Dinosaurplanet comic?

~Sigh~ :P


:o Hey Thanks! Im amazed that this got a response after all this time. Thanks for listening! ^_^


NO PROBLEMMM!!! :shock: :lol: :o