[Original song] "Of Love"

[KaithyChan]

Hey! I'm a little newbie here and this is the first time that I post something! :D

Introduction..!
I wrote this song not long ago and thought that it would be good if I could get some critique on it! ^___^ Please be constructive though :D

Download here...! It's a video so I uploaded it on Youtube! here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rZRYQODmKCA (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rZRYQODmKCA)

Running time: The song is around 3 minutes but I uh... did a little introduction to it, ahahaa!

Thanks for listening and I hope you enjoy it~!

PS: I'd also like to have some pointers on how to sing little more clearly.... As you'll see, my voice is sort of airy XD I'm not very good with my mid-voice and help would really be appreciated! ^__^ <33

[andy ichigo]

awww~ You're so cute!
This was beautiful~ I envy your piano playing skills too. Just.....wow...... 0-0
AWESOME JOB!!!
Lyrics were beautiful as well.

[KaithyChan]

:D :D :D

Thank you so much, Andy Ichigo! ^_____^ *worked really hard on the lyrics* I'm glad you liked it! Ah, it's really cool when you write a song and you find that other people like it as well! ^___^ *proud* xD