h20 -footprints in the sand- (Katayoku no Icarus)

[ichigo_m]

this is my latest song Katayoku no Icarus in english (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5nndIMUJ3V4)
please enjoy
i like how it came out (:

lyrics
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a long lost past,
a far off sky,
scars that will never fade!
only 'cause you were there,i can smile again today.


a sky of many blues,
unforgetable pasts.
pulling at my heart and granting my wishes all together!
you aim for a far off star.
i say no you can't get there
i have forgot that you really do have wings.

could it be i have lost my light!
the one from the sky i fine!

i just want you to look at me
no matter what you may see
and i wept!

i want to be a bird
become a strong wind
will my wish come true?
you always teased me!
for wishing for these things

together forever
holding hands
will we ever grow wings?

your voice.
i hear it.
ah, why do these tears run down my face?
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critque please (:

[andy ichigo]

Your voice has a lot of potential. I've listening to your singing projects for a long time now and I've noticed quite a few things that need to be worked on. First if all, I want to hear your singing a lower octave beacause when you are singing high, it often sounds strained and unatural. Also, try to work on breathing control and pitch. The lyrics flowed rather nicely though. (Can I use them? Of course, I would give credit to you. ;))

[ichigo_m]

yes of course you can use the lyrics (:

and thank you i'm sooo horrible at breath controal XD

[andy ichigo]

yes of course you can use the lyrics (:

and thank you i'm sooo horrible at breath controal XD

No, thank you. :)

[ichigo_m]

*bump bumpity bump bump bum bum!*

[ichigo_m]

critque please (: *puppy eyes*