[SP] Yume No Tsubasa (for Amree Takahara! :D)

[Luchia]

This is Amree-chans birthday present! :D

HAPPY 17th BDAY AMREE <3

It took me a bit to find a song, so I sung Yume no Tsubasa from Tsubasa Chronicles :D



Youtube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=meYRsO8oaSc)

[Luchia]

it cut off at the end :( Youtube hates me :(

[Seissha]

I really loved it! There were some pitch problems here and there, but you practically almost sounded like Sakura which is what made the pitch problems not as big ^^

You have a really pretty voice though! Keep singing and work on those small bits because sometimes the most smallest notes or shortest ones tend to go off key when you least expect it. Hahaha. Trust me. It happens to the best of us xD

Other then that, very cute overall!

And that's very kind of you to sing a song for someones birthday! <3

[Presea]

My, do I love this song. :) Mind if I critique?

You have a pretty voice! Though, you sound kind of forced, or your singing in your head voice. It was a bit pitchy and some of the notes were flat at places, but higher voices are hard to do (I believe they're harder than alto for some people, like me. :() But you were on somewhat the same pitch as Sakura, so, I didn't really mind much though. Your voice flowed with the song really good, too!

The mixing was good. Some of the 'la's were out of place but it was really good, and there were no peaks or anything (well at least I didn't hear any). :D I'd give it a 4.8/5.

That's sweet of you to make a gift like that. :)
I love the ending! Yes, Youtube is evil sometimes.

[AmreeTakahara]

UWAAAH! ARIGATOU LUCHIA-CHAN! IT WAS SOOO PRETTY AND WONDERFUL! *Sparkly eyes* ^__________________^ Thank you sooo much for the gift!! >^^<

[andy ichigo]

Very cute~ :3
A few things that need to be worked on though:
+Breathing control
+Pitch
+Pronounciation
+Sounded strained
Did you try to imitate Sakura in this? If you did, great job! That's the first thing that I noticed. ^^