[FANBASED] The Legend Of Zelda Four Swords Manga Chapter 1 PART 1

[xXxSkyyexXx]

Hiya!! XD
I have been working on a Legend Of Zelda Four Swords RadioPlay and part one is now done! ^^ Part 2 will be up within 2 days! ^^
I have 3 exams and it's my birthday on the 12th, so It will be up by then =D

I would like to thank my AMAZING cast! XD

Green: Magic Kaito
Blue: Data Drain
Red: Me - xXxSkyyexXx
Vio: Preston A Ordway
Dark Link: Keefer
Pirates: Umakbill and DataDrain
Links Dad: Airius
Princess Zelda: Kairi
Villager: Me - xXxSkyyexXx
Maiden: BrookLynn
Monster: DataDrain

Here are the links below! ^^

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6uoAIRYTX4
Veoh: Coming Soon
Mega Video: Coming Soon

Enjoy!! XD
Please Critique :hug

*If you need lines to tell what person is what, just say ^^***

[bobsinbobsled]

OH CRAP I FORGOT TO SEND IN MAH REDOES >_<
I'll see if I can get some of them in soon. once again, I'm SOOOO Sorry. I've been kinda busy.

[o0Anime0o]

Hey!! This is pretty good! ^^
I have never seen a Zelda manga well acted before! You should do more mangas! ^^

Okay then! Critique time:P

Link/Green: Wow! I thought you where amazing! You are perfect for Link/Green. Your emotion was very nice and acting was brilliant! :3 I just love your boy voice M.Kaito! ^^ Hope to hear from you again in future chapters ^^

Blue: I have only heard about 2 lines as blue, but you pirate was good, and from what I can remember from the aud thred, you are the monster rite? :) You sounded good! ^^ I think I'll hear more of you in part 2 :D

Red: I like your boy voice ^^ I have heard you in the Sailor Moon dub and your Hotaru was really cute, but I really liked your Red! :D Keep it up! You have come along way from Sailor Moon doing a girls voice, but your boys is very nice ;)

Vio: Like Blue, I have only heard one or two lines, so I can't comment much, but you sounded good for Vio! ^^

Dark/Shadow Link: Your voice is veryyy eriee for him which makes you perfect for the job! XD I really liked all of it and your emotion in your lines! I loved you laugh! It made me shiver!! XD hahaa!! Keep it up in future chapters!

Pirates: Not much to say here, but was good. Could have been abit better with the pirate kind of accent ^^

Princess Zelda: Kairi!! XD You where amazing! XD I LOVED your Zelda! Your emotion was good, and clear. Your voice shows the soft side to her, but I can emagine you to show her Tomboy-ish side too! You could have made that 'Link!' when she was getting oulled away by Shadow Link abit stronger, but it was nice! Keep up the good work! ;)

Villager: Not much to say here Skyye sorry :P Your accent need abit of work, but your emotion was fine! ^^

Maiden: Very nice! ^^ You showed great emotion, and from what i can remember in the chapters, you have a bigger role in the next chapter don't you? I loved your scream, it sounded so real, like it was you being taken away! Very nice! ^.^

Very nie over all! ^^ Keep it up guys!! XD

[xXxSkyyexXx]

OH CRAP I FORGOT TO SEND IN MAH REDOES >_<
I'll see if I can get some of them in soon. once again, I'm SOOOO Sorry. I've been kinda busy.

Don't worry about it! ^^
:P Its ok =D

Thanks for the critique o0Anime0o ^^

[bobsinbobsled]

Wait... did I have any lines in here, other than the "Yeah!" at the end? I couldn't tell.

[xXxSkyyexXx]

Uumm.... I don't know. This is part 1, you say more in part 2.
Can I still have thoes re-dos in though before the 13th if possible?

[bobsinbobsled]

13th? Easy. I'm recording them now XP

[Data Drain]

Ahh, excellent! I've been waiting for this! =D Gonna critique as soon as Youtube stops hating me and lets me watch/listen!

[Kairi]

@o0Anime0o : Thank you! ^^

@Everyone: Oh my gosh, I adore this radioplay! This is such a great project, and I'm honored to work with such talented people. I don't have anything bad to say about it...great job, everyone!

[andy ichigo]

Some volume problems here and there, but overall all I thought it was pretty good.

[Magic Kaito]

Okay, time for me to attempt a critique XD;

Green: Magic Kaito- Um, I'm not gonna critique myself ^^;

Blue: Data Drain- I don't have any complaints, but you haven't really talked much yet, so I can't say anything else.

Red: xXxSkyyexXx- Again, not much to go on yet, but your boy voice is very good!

Vio: Preston A Ordway- I think I heard two words from you, so again, a real critique will have to wait til part two.

Dark Link: Keefer- Ooo, you sounded very creepy and evil. I liked it!

Pirate: Umakbill- I thought you could have sounded more devious. You're pillaging a town but it sounded a bit too laid back if you get what I'm saying.

Pirate: DataDrain- Sounded fine to me! Nice energy and whatnot. I think my only issue is that I could tell by listening that you were also Blue, but it's not like the pirate is coming back so it's not a big deal.

Links Dad: Airius- I liked it. I think the first few lines where he was talking to Link could have sounded a bit more authoritative. You didn't sound upset enough that he had just disobeyed you again. The scene with Zelda was good, though.

Princess Zelda: Kairi- Very nice job. I like your Zelda. There were two lines I thought could have had more energy, the "The maidens!" and "Link!" toward the end, but other than I enjoyed it.

Villager: xXxSkyyexXx- I wanted to hear more energy from you here. You had the right emotion but not enough force behind it, I think. Like, really shout for help. Do what you need to for the mic volumes, but don't be afraid to shout.

Maiden: BrookLynn- Not a huge part, but I have no complaints. Nice work.


Mixing- I agree that the volume was a little weird. The music was a very nice touch, but it covered up the voices at times. I know there are ways to even out levels on all of the sound for the talking, but I'm not sure what program you use. And right around when Link was going to pull out the Four Sword everything suddenly got louder. Or maybe it was just my computer or something o.o I also thought there were some pauses between lines that were a tiny bit too long.

Other than that, again, I loved having the music, and the sound effects also sounded very good. Can't wait for Part 2!

[xXxSkyyexXx]

Sorry about the sound "^.^
I'll fix it when I've done part 2 and upload it on Veoh or Megavideo so it's not in parts.

It was weird, some peoples lines were really laud and others quiet. o.0 I'll fix it! ^^

Thanks for the critique!!

[Atrius]

o_O
I need to pay more attention, I hadn't even noticed this was out.

You misspelled my name again >_<

Green: Magic Kaito -Very good, the emotion in your voice was great. Your battle cry when you attack Dark Link could have been a bit better though.

Blue: Data Drain , Red: xXxSkyyexXx , Vio: Preston A Ordway - I'm gonna wait for a chapter where you have more lines before I say anything.

Dark Link: Keefer - Very nice evil laugh, I can't wait to hear more lines from you.

Pirates:
Umakbill - Could have used more energy, you're in the middle of pillaging the town after all.
DataDrain -Excellent, great emotion, and energy.

Links Dad: Atrius - Absolutely terrible, you made my ears bleed... Er... *ahem* Actually I think I agree with you Magic Kaito

Princess Zelda: Kairi - Excellent, you're great for the role. I wish the "Link!" at the end had more energy, but other than that you did great.

Villager: xXxSkyyexXx - Pretty good, but something was a bit odd that I can't quite put my finger on... It may have been from the accent you were using.

Maiden: BrookLynn - Nice gasp, and scream. Excellent emotion.

Mixing - The music all fits very nicely, same for the sound effects. There are a couple places where the pauses between lines could have been little bit longer, and some volume issues especially toward the end.

[crono04]

since so far its been compliment after compliment (none of which are wrong, by the way. Kaito and Kairi especially performed very well), i have one complaint. toward the end, the sound effects were noticeably missing or it seemed some things that could have sounded cool, like Link dividing, were silent.

[Brooke Lynn]

Wow everyone did such a great job! I love it and I can't wait to hear part 2!

[o0Anime0o]

yeh! i want to see it!

[Japanimaniac13]

Aww, that was really cute! :D Good job, all of you!

Magic Kaito: Just a quick extra comment- I really like how you (dunno if conciously) imitated Link's screams from the game, especially when he fell from the hole and when he drew the Four Sword. I think that's a great idea! Keep that up!

[Magic Kaito]

Aww, that was really cute! :D Good job, all of you!

Magic Kaito: Just a quick extra comment- I really like how you (dunno if conciously) imitated Link's screams from the game, especially when he fell from the hole and when he drew the Four Sword. I think that's a great idea! Keep that up!
Actually, on a lot of those I was trying to make it sound like he did in the game XD (or at least Wind Waker, I haven't played FSA). I wasn't so much when he was falling, but I'm glad it still sounded like that. Thanks!