LittleStar's First Demo Reel =O

[LittleStar]

Hihi. I finally got around to doing my first demo reel. I'm still an amateur at this, so please be nice but constructive criticism/critiques/comments are really appreciated~

Putfile (http://media.putfile.com/LittleStars-Demo-Real)
Length: 00:49

(And yeah, the volume is a bit iffy at some parts.)
Thanks for your timmeee~ =D

[BigTUnit1]

That was short and sweet:D I would probably turn down the music a tad though, because it sometimes overpowers your voice. I like your voice, and that was some good stuff:)

[LittleStar]

That was short and sweet:D I would probably turn down the music a tad though, because it sometimes overpowers your voice. I like your voice, and that was some good stuff:)

Thanks! <3 Yesh, I'm still new at this mixing stuff so I'll try to fix the music later and put up a better version. Thanks again~ =D

[GInsenshi]

Ooh SO CUTE! I LIKE IT!

Now to scout you out!

[Kage-Ichihashi]

-giggles- I have always loved your voice ever since you auditioned for my radioplay. You've got an amazing range. I'm impressed. Your - I think it was Lust - voice really shocked me. Your voice is so cute and youthful, so I was incredibly surprised to hear that. It was wonderful!

I really liked this, LittleStar! :hug

(You should try for some extra roles in the radioplay - I bet you could pull something off 8D)

[LittleStar]

@GInsenshi - Heehee, thanks! <3

@Kage-Ichihashi - *huggles* Thanks! Yeah, it was Lust XD. I was wondering if I could pull it off or not but I think it worked out okay. And maybe I will~ Expect something soon! =D

[bninjah]

ZOMG!
i absolutly love you voice! its really cute!
i thought the music went well with the voices, and i thought that you had just the right amount of emotion for each part!
great work!

[mippa]

you already know that I am one of your biggest fans, LittleStar! You have a naturally cute voice! The music is a little loud, yes--but you know I scout/recommend you whenever I can.

I would like to offer a few tips for a stronger demo reel, outside of the music:

Be careful that the pronunciation of your words is perfectly clear the first listen around. There were a few spots that a few words were slurred together, so I couldn't quite make out what you were saying.

I would choose a different clip for the ending. It ends a bit abruptly, and I think you need to ease your listeners out of the demo reel, if that makes any sense.

It was really great hearing voices that I haven't heard before! Keep up the awesome work!!

[Hane Moon]

::Snorffle.:: Yer too cute. XD


Well, I don't feel like repeating what's already been said critique-wise, so Ima just say RIGHT ON! :3

[LittleStar]

@bninjah - Weeeee~ Thankiiess, bnin! *pokehug* I appreciate your comments and time! =D

@mippa - *glomp* I'm honored! And I keep forgeting to thank you properly for that. Yer too nice~ And thanks a bunch for the tips! I'll work on the pronunciation; as for the ending I was thinking the same thing too. Maybe I should've put the Miki line - "..coveted title of supreme voice actress" thing at the end? I'll remember that. Thankss! <33

@HaneMoon - Yayy, thanks! XDD Heehee~ x3 That means a lot~

[zZbakachanZz]

:shock: I was sad that it ended so quickly T-T

First with the ups...
The characters that you chose were well-acted out. Your voice is very nice to listen to, and if it were behind animation, I'm sure you'd have a large crowd of fans. (xD). I don't know if you're experienced in this, but you sure sound like it. Your first, second, and fourth lines show to me as your strong suits, though that's just my opinion. Your high voice range is perfect for almost all young female character parts. Also, the music you chose for each character was perfect.


Now for the downs...
I don't know why, but the part where you said, "Why do you choose to go on this path?", it seemed a bit flat in emotion. A line like that (with such awesome music in the background) demands deeper emotion if it were to be 'felt' by the audience. For the second to last line, again, it seemed a bit stale. You should work on the emotions you presented in your demo more.

Overall....
Your voice in general is awesome and some of your lines were right on perfect. If anything, work on fine-tuning a few stale emotions. I'd like to see your work in the future...

~Toki

[andy ichigo]

I agree with everyone, that the bgm overpowers your voice quite a bit. But from what I heard, you have an amazing voice~ I hope that one day I can work with you in the future. :)

[Sayaka]

Well, most people have already stated what I wanted to say. But I would like to stress how adorable your voice is! Just love it. ^_^ Keep up the great work.

[mippa]

Maybe I should've put the Miki line - "..coveted title of supreme voice actress" thing at the end? I'll remember that. Thankss! <33



I think that would be a perfect ending for your next demo reel. (And pssst if you want me to help you out, all you have to do is poke me and ask!)

[Kathryn]

Oh man, your voice is so cute! You totally master that high range while sounding completely natural at the same time which is really difficult to do, in my opinion! Great job!

In terms of critiques, the background music has already been mentioned but also, I think for your next demo you should give each voice a little more time. I think you could eliminate a voice or two that sound similar and showcase some more of your deeper voices (IE: "Dude, could you get the pizza?") And I totally support your decison to change the last clip to the "voice actress" line.

Overall, nice work!

[Shinigami_Yuumura]

OMG You have an amazing voice! Little boy and girl voice! Such a Chibi voice too! Like a cute Neko girl..Like Ichigo! From Tokyo Mew Mew! Its got that cute cute Meow tone to it. ALso I think you'd also be a good Haruhi from Ouran High School Host Club!

[Ayu]

Cute but at the end you sounded a little fourced.

[Tinker_Jet]

Wow... your voice is TOO cute. XD

[Ran]

Lovely range of girl voices. I don't have much to say because some people have took the words out of my mouth.

Well done ^^

~Ran

[Lucien]

Clips were way too short for me to get anything more that a glimpse of who any of these characters were, outside of 'cute' and 'spunky', leaving not much distinction in the end. Using longer lines, with different energy and emotional levels would clear this up right away.