Echizen - Future

[Kyouhei]

ahhh ~ x3 my rythem and control isnt so well,
but this song, i like it really a lot! ^O^
enjoy! critiques welcome!=D

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=765104

[andy ichigo]

Suge~ Your voice suit this very well and your emotion is right on. But your very pitchy and those high notes are killers for you. Also, in some places you are flat as well. Justpractice and I'm sure you'll be great on no time. You've already improved from when I last heard you. :)

[rukariel]

OH! I've been wanting to do this toooo! <3

...But never mind that. >>;;;

Well, you sound slighty more stable here in than in last recording, but might want to watch the pitching there. And like andy_ichigo said, the high notes are killing you. Whole thing would have sounded much better without it.

And.... There's something else I can't put my finger on. It's kinda like... You're trying too hard to control? Something just sounds forced to me. Just let yourself go. You're supposed to have fun too! :3~

[Nayami]

I'm going to agree with the others here. The tone of your voice is quite nice and fits the song rather well. But your pitch is a little unstable. I think it might help if you tried to sing a little more naturally--I'm kind of wondering if you're trying to mimic Minagawa Junko's voice, and that's what's giving off the instability. Just relax and have fun. You have a lot of potential in your voice. ^^

[Kyouhei]

wow thank you 3!^_^

oh yeahh maybe im really forcing me in a way xD
ah~ "I'm kind of wondering if you're trying to mimic Minagawa Junko's voice"
nayami! how did you know LOL xD
mann...i really wanna sing like her, i think it sounds so cool..=p