View Full Version : Sally's Song: High and Low
DarkFoxSS1
02-28-2008, 03:20 PM
WARNING: The following was sang by a person who shouldn't be singing, but decied to do so anyway. It is strongly suggested that when listening, you should wear earplugs at all times until the songs have finished. Thanks you.
Yes, Eze, I did it.. and I'm not un-doing it! >:P
OK, here's m singing Sally's Song from The Nightmare Before Christmas, in higher and lower pitches. @_@; Is that the right wording? Meh, they'll get it.
As you've probably noticed, I'm not too cnfident in my singing voice. So like so many others, I'll let you critic, cause... well... I want to improve!! XD;
http://media.putfile.com/Sallys-Song-Low-pitch
http://media.putfile.com/Sallys-Song-High-Pitch
Thanks for listening!! ... And I can't pay for medical bills if you've suffered any injuries.
Ok, done joking now. XD
andy ichigo
02-29-2008, 12:45 AM
In both versions you are flat and the emotion is missing. Remember to stay on pitch, but without straining your voice. Also, be lowder and try to bring more strength to your voice. I hope to hear more of your singing stuff and watch you progress.
Rabids Squirrel
02-29-2008, 03:29 AM
Sorry, but I have to agree with Ichigo.
This isn't to say you shouldn't stop working at it! I think you have an amazing voice that could be a potential great singing voice! Just need to work on the little things and tune it up :3
Good work for a first recording, though ^_^
DarkFoxSS1
02-29-2008, 04:25 AM
Thanks guys! And no need to appologize, at least you replied!! XD I was getting kindda worried there!
Thanks again! @.@ I'll do my best to improve!! HONEST!
>> Cause you guys were cool enough to give out pointers. :3
Seissha
02-29-2008, 04:36 AM
Yeah, what was repeated before. You were flat and there was no emotion.
And when I listen to your voice I hear some sort of rock-ish type voice.
You sing through the nose and many people can hate that method or love it, but I believe sometimes people can't help it and instead of being ashamed they should embrace it.
Do excercises.- Practice breathing, and where you should place your notes. Try singing higher in your head voice. Like you're talking like a snobby rich woman: " I would like some tea with my cake! " Think high if you're starting to go flat.
Practice the scale and always do the proper breathing methods so you don't ruin your voice of strain like most singers do. (Instead of breathing with lungs, try practicing with the stomach. Place your hand there to make sure everytime you breath it goes out and then in when you exhale[it's the proper way to breath- or so the doctors say- ]
Place your voice in the middle, the sound in the front, and the breath in the back. You'll know what I mean once you start practicing the scale.
Think a bit rounder when you sing certain songs like these. They are musical and semi-operatic and they need that type of voice. You were on the edge of it, but because of the lack of emotion and such it didn't work out, but great attempt either way!
um...I'm trying to think what other advice...oh! Always do your best and don't listen to others unless they are going to help you. You have immensive potential because you sound like my friend(She sings through her nose and she's in advance choir with me. And she tried VERY hard).
Anyways, Good luck! :hug
DarkFoxSS1
02-29-2008, 04:42 PM
Holy krap! XD That's alot of advice, Seissha, but good, nonetheless.
Yeah, I usually sing along to things like Alternative rock or something of the like. XD; Can't really say I'm any beter at doing it, though. O_o And I didn't notice the singing through the nose, thing... *was trying so hard not too* XD;
Admittedly... I find breathing through the stomach hard! :sweat I'm doing that now, maybe I just need to get used to it?
Also... I'm not sure what you mean by "think rounder," and not too sure how I could put more emotion into this... A few more pointers, please? I know I'm asking for alot of advice, please don't be too upset at me for it! XD
I may re-record this song later on to see how I've improved.
Oh! And thanks! :3
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