Rolling Star [Bleach/YUI]

[yukie]

This was fun~ Recently, I finally did a Bleach marathon (skipping the fillers) and caught up on the series, yay! So this is to celebrate my otaku success. Well, and also to be a stress reliever for me, midterm exams are quite evil.

I hope I've been doing at least a little better with these kinds of songs, I've been trying more and more songs that are different from the genre I used to stick to.

YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ojSYDsPoXnE) | Box (http://www.box.net/shared/na3vygu80o)

Please feel free to comment and critique! Thanks for listening~

[Sapphire]

I think you have just the right amount of energy for this song. I really like it. :)

[AmyAnn]

I've not heard this song before, but it sounds fantastic. Perfect amount of energy and your voice sounds fantastic and the timing is great. Good job

[Celira]

Cute! The energy was indeed fairly good. The first thing I noticed immediately was that you tend to pronounce many of the syllables almost completely separately. Although it's good that you were trying to get the enunciation and pronunciation down correctly, the lyrics should still flow easily. It almost made you sound rushed and nervous in some parts. Careful! :)

Another note-- I think I heard you breathe in the middle of phrases once or twice. Try to budget your breath at the beginning of lines so you don't have to do this. Keep at it! :)

I suppose I shouldn't post my version of this out there now-- too many will be a clutter, aiyaaa.

[Nuko]

*-* Yukie I swear you can read my mind! I was talking to lilmenchi last night that I want to do this song Fuuu~!!

I think you did a brilliant job X3 Celira said things that I was going to, so I am not going to repeat that...

I loved it so much *___* <3333 A thousand hearts to Yukie.

[Cheshire]

Ooh, sweet! I love the energy you've got in this, it makes me wanna get up and dance a little. :3

Aside from what Celira pointed out, I can't find anything else to offer any critique on. I think you did really, really well with this. :D

*downloads*

[andy ichigo]

The energy was great, but in a song like this you just have to belt it out. Still, amazing job. :)

[bninjah]

great job!
i really like it =)

[ICD]

First of all, please may I commend you for stepping out of your comfort zone, Vinci <3. I have noticed that ballad-y songs seem to suit your voice type better, but you totally rocked the song!

The first thing that I noticed is that you adapted a completely tone compared to your other works *0*. Pitch was very much in control, although in some places (especially the first half of the song), it felt as though you were running out of breath and not being able to catch up with the fast beat of the song. Having sung it myself, I have to say that the chorus is really evil T_T. It took me so many takes to be able to sing the few lines in one breath. You chose to take snappy breaths instead, which might have contributed to what I had just mentioned. :) Of course it's completely down to personal preference after all ^_^.

Another thing that I noticed is that you seem to have sung the lyrics differently compared to YUI, like the way that you sometimes cram more words into one note and such :D. Not that it's a problem though since people who haven't heard this song would definitely not be able to tell. In some bits it sounded a bit too rushed, like in 'shinjiteru no lonely days' etc. This is just one heck of an evil song, right >(!? But yearh those are all minor things that are understandable with such a fast song =)

Overalll, I enjoyed it thoroughly. Your pitch, especially, has improved compared to the last song that I heard from you *0*. Energy was there too! *forgot to mention energy* It's just a little bit of a shame that you didn't try to 'chest' those high notes in 'DORO DOROKE ROLLING STAR' but the way you did it totally made it rock too, trust me 8D. Your 'yeahey's were very well done too 8D. Wohooo totally loved this rendition =D.

[Angelxa]

This was really cute~ good high notes and pitch. Does seem like it could do with a slightly less soft style, but I'm probably just being nit picky~ to be hones, I can't really find anything to complain about! XD it was really good~