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popcarla17
02-10-2008, 03:52 PM
I love this song!
Please give constructive criticism! I'm not a great singer and haven't developed my voice yet (13 years old).

lyrics by me based on the original translation.


http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=UrdIurabNVU#GU5U2spHI_4
andy ichigo
02-10-2008, 09:26 PM
A little pitchy, but you have such a cute voice. It sounds kinda nasally, so try to get those words out more clearly. I hope to hear more from you. Gamabari~
popcarla17
02-11-2008, 03:53 PM
A little pitchy, but you have such a cute voice. It sounds kinda nasally, so try to get those words out more clearly. I hope to hear more from you. Gamabari~

yeah I THINk I have a cold... I'm sniffing anyway XD yeah when I heard I thought that too. it's difficult to understand the lyrics... thank you very much^^
Manabi
02-22-2008, 06:56 PM
hey^^ awesome awesome awesome^^ i love your voice but i agree with andy ichigo...it did sound a little nasily

(btw i think ive told you before but this is happyhippo05 from youtube^^ so umm hi^^)
popcarla17
02-23-2008, 10:23 AM
hey^^ awesome awesome awesome^^ i love your voice but i agree with andy ichigo...it did sound a little nasily

(btw i think ive told you before but this is happyhippo05 from youtube^^ so umm hi^^)

ooh okay XD yeah it does doesn't it O_O I'll send you a message why.
Vincent_the_Paladdin
02-23-2008, 11:05 AM
Very beautiful, I love your voice and the song was very sweet. For someone who was kinda sick you did awesome!:rose
popcarla17
02-23-2008, 03:58 PM
Very beautiful, I love your voice and the song was very sweet. For someone who was kinda sick you did awesome!:rose

lol I'm not exactly "sick" XD it's just something that's need to be cured... it's kinda hard to explain. let's just say my nose has been stuffed up my whole life. but thank you very much^^
DNAngelsWiz
02-23-2008, 04:19 PM
Wow! That was really good! Yes it does sound like a little runny nose there. XD But yeah you're 13! That's crazy, you have very good rhythm. But you still have to remember that being 13 means that your voice is still developing, even if you don't think so. Keep up with singing like in school and other singing-related activities and you'll sound awesome even when you're sick! XD I can't wait to hear more of your stuff! ^-^
popcarla17
02-24-2008, 10:57 AM
Wow! That was really good! Yes it does sound like a little runny nose there. XD But yeah you're 13! That's crazy, you have very good rhythm. But you still have to remember that being 13 means that your voice is still developing, even if you don't think so. Keep up with singing like in school and other singing-related activities and you'll sound awesome even when you're sick! XD I can't wait to hear more of your stuff! ^-^

teehee thank you everyone for being so positive^^ I'm fixing my nose don't worry! yeah I had singing lessons and I play he piano so I HAVE to have a good rythm.... this year I also did jazz choir. yes my voice is developing and I know it ><my voice used to be WAY higher XD you can check out my youtube account for more of my stuff... but most of them suck. though I AM planning a kokoro no tamago fandub in English and... I had another one.... well I forgot but keep your eyes and ears open!