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01-20-2008, 09:49 PM
As I'm listening to it again there are some clicks I didn't notice before...;~;'' Well anyway, I worked hard on this, so I'd love any critique anyone has to offer. =3
English Vocals: Hatomikazuki
English Lyrics: Hatomikazuki
The harmonies were hard...and the spoken stuff at the beginning iand the end sound like ick. >__>''
01-20-2008, 10:45 PM
Your voice is too low for Yukkiiiiii... good job with the harmonies though. I think the voice track is too loud for the music though, you might need to mix it better.
Jintor It isnt the point of the voice of the character when it comes to singing >>
I will listen when my internet gets back properly and Critique ^^~
01-21-2008, 12:25 AM
its doesn't load for me, NOO I wanna listen!
01-21-2008, 02:51 AM
it sounded that you really tried hard for this song..
points on your effort..
Im not fond of this song...so i can't really give a proper critique [SORRY ABOUT THAT XD]
but you have improved and your voice are somewhat softer now :)
01-21-2008, 09:14 PM
This is pretty good. I especially like the harmonies.
Critique: I can't really hear the lyrics well; Try to enunciate them more, because from what I can hear, they're good~ I think the tone you used for this song is a little too harsh for the song—perhaps a softer tone would have complimented the song better. As for the speaking parts, since you were singing in English, maybe you should have tried to say the parts sans a Japanese accent.
I could really tell you put a lot of effort in it. Good job~ :3
01-26-2008, 09:41 PM
You need to pronounce the words a little more cleary, but other than that I really liked it. :razz:
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