I feel like posting

[Darth Mongoose]

I've never posted any art on this forum before! The shock! ...Well, not really that shocking but I'll post some of my latest stuff here now!

http://home.graffiti.net/darth_mongoose/dm_doodle02.jpg

http://home.graffiti.net/darth_mongoose/femalefighter.jpg

http://home.graffiti.net/darth_mongoose/gullwings.png

Wheeeee! That's better! I'm currently working on a webcomic, I might post up some of the concept scribbles for comments sometime soon.

[Ariadyne]

^^ I only use a .5mm HB mechanical pencil too, lol--besides my hand and a refillable eraser that is. No one needs 12 different pencils!

I really like your pictures, especially the first two. I really like the detail on the second picture and can't wait to see some of your concept sketches ^^

Uh, critiques...the only thing I don't really like about the first picture is the wings on the "green or pink fairy", and Belldandy's hair--it's nice, but looks a bit thin.
I really like the coloring in the last picture (wish I could do that...) but Paine's head looks a bit off, and it might just be me by Yuna's arms look a bit short--nic job though! Quite original! ^^

Good luck with your webcomic and keep up the good work!

[Darth Mongoose]

Yeah, that Gullwings one is pretty old now. It was fun when I drew it and I like the idea behind it, but that doesn't get rid of all the technical mistakes in it, such as....where the heck is Rikku's other leg? I do think though that Yuna in jeans just makes you think about her character. I'm nineteen too, so I wanted to draw Yuna as somebody who could be a normal nineteen year old girl rather than a 'super heroine'....That and I think she needs to cover up a little more.
Like I mention in the notes, that is a REALLY bad drawing of Belldandy, I can draw her better than that if I try....and use a pic of her rather than my memory. Really Both she, the self portrait and the Pink fairy were drawn as a joke, as doodles around the edge of a good piece that in itself is really a joke sketch, I took character designs for a different project I'm working on and gave them wings because it looked cute.
The female fighter is my latest. To put the pics in order, the Gullwings were about 4-6 months back. Juno and Lucia about two months and The female fighter pretty recent. Some people (all of them male) don't like how un-femenine she looks. I like the shading and detail on her a lot though, as well as that expression. Her face reminds me a lot of a friend of mine.

.....And Chianna from Farscape rocks! She was my fave character! I love your avvie ^_^

[Ariadyne]

Really Both she, the self portrait and the Pink fairy were drawn as a joke
Well you're an excellent joke artist, lol.


The female fighter is my latest....Some people (all of them male) don't like how un-femenine she looks. I like the shading and detail on her a lot though, as well as that expression.
Yeah, I thought she was male at first, then I saw the file name and the um...breast plates, lol. It's still nice! ^^


.....And Chianna from Farscape rocks! She was my fave character! I love your avvie ^_^
Amen. And thank you, lol. It took me awhile to get transparencies right, lol. (don't like my signature though, I'll change it eventually...)

[Katie]

My favorite picture would be the Gullwings one, but both Rikku and Yuna have... no elbows... Midget arms, in fact. Aside from that, very nice! I really like your pencil work. :)