Sparrow's First(& I mean FIRST) Demo Reel

[BroadwayPirate]

I know its very short, its only a small part of the range I have. I really didn't know how to do this haha ^^;; Its my first attempt at anything with this whole...shinanigans. Well....heres a list of the Chars in order of appearance:

1. Tohru Honda- Fruits Basket
2. Honey Sempai- Ouran High School Host Club
3. Haruhi Fujioka- Ouran High School Host Club
4. Renge- Ouran High School Host Club
5. Shampoo- Ranma 1/2
6. Kagome Higurashi- Inuyasha
7. Ranma-female- Ranma 1/2
8. Kasumi - Ranma 1/2
9.Chii - Chobits
10. Nyuu/Lucy- Elfen Lied
11. Lucy - Elfen Lied
12. Ichigo Momomiya- Tokyo Mew Mew
13. Mew Ichigo- Tokyo Mew Mew
14. Luchia - Mermaid Melody Pitchi Pitchi Pitch

and then some accents.

http://download.yousendit.com/546C0FBF0DEE9C1D (http://download.yousendit.com/546C0FBF0DEE9C1D)

Um...yeah...I don't think its very good...but its Something right?

~♥Sparrow♥

[Katrina]

Hiya sparrow~~ I LOVED YOUR DEMO REEL!!!! You have a pretty good vocal range. I think you have great potential! Emotion used is good and i can tell you that you have GREAT potential! Cant wait to hear your next official demo reel. I think if you add music and soundeffects at the back i assure you it would sound even better ^__^

Your singing was so pretty *__* i loved your voice! and those accents were pretty good xD i live in the UK and i cant pull a british accent my self .__. so well done!

o also... try not to go too close to the mic to maintain a good quality voice ^__^

Welcome to VAA Sparrow ~ =D

[PC2]

Good for a first attempt, definitely. Good voices and emotion. Definitely consider adding music, as it makes things sound a lot better and can make up for many noises and sounds the mike may make during recording. Also, the accents could stand to be a little longer. Might I suggest just going through them one by one without describing them? All in all, a good first attempt, and look forward to hearing your next one. ^^

[BroadwayPirate]

oh my god I wasn't really expecting good feedback at all! Thank you both SO much! Thanks for the suggestions, I use Sound recorder so its a little tough with the music but I'll do my best for my next one! THANK YOU SO MUCH

[BroadwayPirate]

any suggestions on how to make it better?

[andy ichigo]

It says that the file has expired. ^^;
Would you please re-upload it?

[BroadwayPirate]

certainly I can do that for ya! ^^