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TamTu
08-17-2004, 01:47 AM
WIBD is a short written by Dani for a school project and we teamed up for this production. Prividing me with a solid cast and a script, I got to the mixing.

"When I Became Deaf" tells the story of Jamie Vaughn, a high school student who wakes up deaf. Listen as she experiences the world around her..without sound.

When I Became Deaf (http://play-bvp.com/download/audio/bvp-whenibecamedeaf.mp3) <-Download here!
Running time: 8.03 mins
Size: 7.38 mb

Written by Dani Giesy

Cast:

Jamie Vaughn: Dani Giesy
Cassie Martin: Battousai
Mrs. Vaughn: Kelsie Payne
Marcus Vaughn: Cheetahd586
Mrs. Ray: Ashley Keen
Michael Paisley: TamTu Bui



Producer's notes: Aside from Kelsie, this cast had been completely alien to me since I've never worked with them before (minus Dani). My compliments go to Battousai; excellent performance. *nodnod* keep it up :) I enjoyed mixing this, even if it was due tomorrow and had to be finished very quickly.

BGM may be familiar to the BVP regulars among you >.>...but again *points up* Had to finish this quick and grabbed what I could find on my harddrive :)

Ashley Keen
08-17-2004, 02:13 AM
Producer's notes: Aside from Kelsie, this cast had been completely alien to me since I've never worked with them before (minus Dani).

You liar you XD You've worked with me before and you know it XD

*continues download*

Battousai
08-17-2004, 01:55 PM
Great acting, great mixing, great BGM/SFX, great script... it was just grrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat. ^_^x (terrible tony the tiger reference, i know)

-battousai-

Ashley Keen
08-17-2004, 02:44 PM
XD Great job everyone!

XD Especially Dani and Battousai. You two were excellent.

o.o; my mic quality is shot to crap though

I should get a new one.

cheetahd586
08-17-2004, 02:50 PM
Great job all, I loved it!!!

DaniGirl
08-17-2004, 08:54 PM
great job everyone!! I presented it in class today and I made a 110%!!!


*hugs everyone* Thank you soooooo much you guys!

Fiona C
08-17-2004, 09:40 PM
Dani -- I loved it. You write beautifully. &lt;3 Do more of this stuff. It's fantastic.

Blue-San -- You know I admire your mixing skills. *Smiles* Good work. Recognised your BGM -- it's the "Liar Liar" music that you used in JTASI. ^_^

The cast -- Loved you guys. &lt;3 Ashley, your voice is amazing. I believe this is the first time I've heard you in a radioplay, and I'm definitely impressed. Everybody rocked. Keep it up, folks. &lt;3

Koinu
08-17-2004, 10:50 PM
That was great! =D

Jenna
08-18-2004, 08:08 PM
This was great Dani, I am sure you'll get a great mark for this, especially with the help of Blue's mixing.

Blue was solid, loveably insensitive and laughably smooth as Michael. 'The whole deaf thing still' line cracked me up, what does Jamie see in him?

OMG I loved Celly as the teacher! I just wanted to slap that bitch. Perfect delivery of the 'not everyone here is deaf' line (love ya Cel)

Dani was a great leading lady 'Home.... ohh horray' was a great line! And the script was great.

Battousai made a great Cassie, especially at such short notice.

The only thing I didn't like was some of the BG scene music.

Overall, a great job! Let me know what grade you get hon.

TamTu
08-18-2004, 08:15 PM
great job everyone!! I presented it in class today and I made a 110%!!!

I probably could've picked better BGM, but seeing as it was...what? 2 am when wrapping things up for this? oy. Not feeling like going through an entire stack of CD-r's with no proper labels of what OSTs are on them. XD

Blue Lionheart
08-19-2004, 10:14 PM
This was really good. :) I enjoyed it!

Koinu
08-19-2004, 10:58 PM
Wait, I don't get how Jamie knew Cassie said they were going home... O.o I didn't hear any writing...

DaniGirl
08-20-2004, 01:47 AM
in the script, it was supposed to be like "ok you, let's get home" and cassie was going to take her home.

The next scene was supposed to be when they were at jamie's house, after they left school.

Klaymen1
02-03-2007, 06:29 AM
aww link is down ;-;

TamTu
02-04-2007, 02:38 AM
Link fixed.

Cinnamon
02-22-2007, 06:30 AM
This was really good guys! The script was well-written, the mixing was great, and the voice-acting was right on point! :D I also like the concept. Very original!

Jamie Vaughn: Dani Giesy- An all-around good voice for a normal teenage girl.

Cassie Martin: Battousai- She sounded very bestfriend-like. I loved when she yelled at Mrs. Ray.

Mrs. Vaughn: Kelsie Payne- You sounded very Motherly.

Marcus Vaughn: Cheetahd586- That's exactly how my friend's pesky brother sounds.

Mrs. Ray: Ashley Keen- Nice job. You sounded very stern.

Michael Paisley: TamTu Bui- You sounded like a perfect teen hearthrob. xD

Everyone did a fantastic job! I'm glad you got an A+