What lies Deep Within the Shadows Ep. 1! (finally!) COME!

[kt_rocks]

Yay! Finally! Ep. 1: Hitomi's Kidnapped.

ok! I finally figured out how this could work... ok
http://briefcase.yahoo.com/
Go there and sign in as..
cheetahchow2
password: andreallybadeggs
once you sign in go to My documents which is in the top left, and then there's the file!


Castlist! (In order of appearance)
Narrator: Battousai
Van: Matt Alan
Hitomi: Sakura_ai
Dilandau: Topleka

Title: What Lies Deep Within the Shadows RP 1
Duration: 3:15
Type: MP3 Audio
Size: 2.97 MB
BGM: Shadow of a Doub (Escaflowne), Hitomi's Theme (Escaflowne), Dance of the Curse (Escaflowne), *Ed. theme* Haruka Kanata (Naruto)

Please enjoy!

btw, it's the first time I ever mixed, so if it sucks, sorry! but if it doesn't, yay! BWAHAHAHAHA! - thanks!


kt

[ClymAngus]

50 minutes, you weren't kidding were you?

we must find you a place with proper band width miss.

[kt_rocks]

... yes... *sniff*
I've been looking for another host since I posted this! Anyone have any ideas?

[Yami no Kitsune]

http://www.groupnetwork.com/

[topleka]

O_o Get on MSN and send it to me already. I'll host it.

[kt_rocks]

YAY! It's quicker now! Woohoo! Won't be needing it anymore, Topleka, but thanks!

[topleka]

::falls out of chair laughing::

Battou-san makes a wonderful dramatic narrator. The music, and all the effects and stuff make it seem so serious, but I can't take it seriously at all ::dies laughing::

Eh...my mic quality seems all messed up. O_o Hmm...

Van was great. I didn't get to hear much Hitomi, but it sounded good. I must say that the narrator was my personal favorite though. ^.^

[kt_rocks]

LOL! Yeah, Iguess it was supposed to be funny! :P hehe! Battousai is great with her lines, lol! ^^

[topleka]

Sorry, I didn't mean I can't take the RP seriously. It's just that the things are so funny, like Dilandau getting his hand stuck and Van knocked out by sleep, but Battou-san's delivery and the music make it seem like a huge drama. ^.^

[Sukisho]

Okay well this is interesting. Some of the lines where a bit staticy and kinda cut off funny which a alittle cleaning could have fixed but that's alright.

Narrator: Battousai - You were great! HEHhehee

Van: Matt Alan - You were really good though personally just a bit too deep for Vaan but that's just me.

Hitomi: Sakura_ai - I really liked the way you sounded for her, good job ^.^

Dilandau: Topleka - Uhhh that's new ..a girl playing Dilandau...Well he did sound girly in the english dub of the series but that's just them, lol anyways you were great at it heheh

[topleka]

Dilandau: Topleka - Uhhh that's new ..a girl playing Dilandau...Well he did sound girly in the english dub of the series but that's just them, lol anyways you were great at it heheh
Um...how is that so new? Dilandau's seiyuu is female: Takayama Minami. And he used to be a girl. O_o

[Sukisho]

Dilandau: Topleka - Uhhh that's new ..a girl playing Dilandau...Well he did sound girly in the english dub of the series but that's just them, lol anyways you were great at it heheh
Um...how is that so new? Dilandau's seiyuu is female: Takayama Minami. And he used to be a girl. O_o

Well it is to me, cuase I never watched the japanese version and haven't seen all of the seires so I wouldn't know that.

[ClymAngus]

Oooo, wasn't prepared for the scream. Think I lost an ear drum. :(

[Kimiko]

I'm not able to download :( Page not found or something.

[topleka]

Dilandau: Topleka - Uhhh that's new ..a girl playing Dilandau...Well he did sound girly in the english dub of the series but that's just them, lol anyways you were great at it heheh
Um...how is that so new? Dilandau's seiyuu is female: Takayama Minami. And he used to be a girl. O_o

Well it is to me, cuase I never watched the japanese version and haven't seen all of the seires so I wouldn't know that.
Oh, okay. ^.^

[Matt Alan]

I'm not able to download :( Page not found or something.

Same here, Flarey sent it. >D

Narrator/Battousai: You crack me up. XD;;;; I'd love to hear you read David Copperfield

Van/Matt Alan: I agree with Flarey, your voice was abit too deep for Van, you need to make up for it in following chapters with better acting than you showed. I was unimpressed.

Hitomi/Sakurai Ai: I want to hear more of you before I give a real crit, but the mic difference between you and Van bugged me a tad(Van's fault I believe though) Great screams. >D

Dilandau/Topleka: Brilliance. I felt you really brought the character to life in all the sinsiter evilness that is Dilly-kun. I'll be looking forward to hearing more of you.

Mixing/Music: For a first time, it was really well done, give yourself a pat on the back. ^^ The music was great, and you really had me going with it, right up til the ending theme? Naruto? O.o; wtf? Cool, but unexpected.

[kt_rocks]

Oooo, wasn't prepared for the scream. Think I lost an ear drum. :(

Aww... I'm sorry! *gives Clym a cookie*

Thanks everyone on the great critiques, I'll try to fix the link! ^^

[Autumn]

My turn! ^^

Kt! I was so proud of you when I first heard this, even though it wasn't completely finished! I could have cried! My little Kt bug, all grown up in the mixing world. Or as they said on Sailor Moon... "I can't believe our little [insert kt's name] is already one step ahead of us..." *Sigh* I can't mix.

Okie dokey, crits, by order of appearance!

Battousai: XD I loved that so much! That drama in your voice will definetly come in handy for later chapters. But, the thing with the hair... wow, that was great. I laughed. You did your job beautifully.

Matt Allan: I thought you did great for Van! As a matter of fact, when I was helping Kt cast, I suggested you be Van, 'cause I really liked your auditions. It's been awhile since I've seen the series, but I'm sure you were pretty accurate.

Sakura_ai: EWW! HORRIBLE MIC QUALITY! MUST GET NEW RECORDING PROGRAM!!!!! Also, fourth line was really bad. (Sorry for blowing your ears out with that scream, Clym! And don't take Kt's cookie, it's poisoned.)

Topleka: Another genius actor. I also suggested you be our little fire-buddy, Dilandou. 'Cause you were great. I look forward to other chapters. ^^ We're gonna have a loooooooooooooooot of scenes together. Long, terrorizing scenes. That will keep you on the edge of your seat. So be prepared.
You also had better mic quality than me. :cry:


Welp, that's about it! Oh, look at the time! ^^ I gotta go, see ya, and great job everyone!

[Chinomi]

GAH! I don't know where to download from! There's no files in your briefcase ahhhh! *melting*

[Autumn]

GAH! I don't know where to download from! There's no files in your briefcase ahhhh! *melting*

Uh Kt... she's right. Where the heck are you?! You're always on the VAA this time of day! Oh... yeah... sorry Chichiri, she's recording. I'll call her as soon as I get home and tell her to fix it. ^^

[kt_rocks]

Aww... sorry! I don't know why it's not working chichiri, it worked when I did so... hm... I don't know... I'll try putting the link back up...

[Autumn]

Kt, check the pm i sent you tosee why it won't work!

[Chinomi]

IT WAS AWESOME! O_O!
..................................................
HIS HAND GOT STUCK!
MUWAHAHHAA!
*runz around in circles* PWNSSSS

[Luckee Cookie]

Mixing/Music: For a first time, it was really well done, give yourself a pat on the back. ^^ The music was great, and you really had me going with it, right up til the ending theme? Naruto? O.o; wtf? Cool, but unexpected.
that`s just what i was thinking o__O it was so... abrutpt :p but hey i love that song so it`s all good in my books ;)

[kt_rocks]

lol! Thanks! hehe, I like to surprise people... ^^

[Battousai]

Finally got around to leaving a comment on this. OMFG, you used "Dance of Curse"... that's one of my fav. songs so props for that! Now for what I thought of everyone... XD;;

Narrator: Who is that?? baaaaaaad performance. booo. ...and they keep saying "dilandau" wrong apparently. *scolds the narrator for the error* >>;

Hitomi: You got a nice...screaming voice... i wish i could scream like that. XD;;

Van: Good performance. 8) 8) 8) 8)

Dilandau: Girlish-boyish-manishly evil. :twisted:

Now as far as the mixing... well, some issues. >>; It could use more sfx... and then there is the factor with static in some people's lines (Van), then someone sounding like they recording in a box or something. o.O (Hitomi) ...and sometimes when people were screaming, it was TOO loudish. Like that ugly noise... xx; And then I thought it odd there be an ED song but not an OP.... o.o; But really, there were some good things! Everyone (minus crummy-narrator person XD) did an awesome job with the acting and the pace of it went smoothly. Just need to iron out a few wrinkles here and there. ...Overall, if this is your first mix ever, it isnt that bad. ^^;;

-battousai-

[Icypopcorn]

ROTFL! This is HILARIOUS! Van's voice is hilarious! He sounds like one of those surfer 'dudes' if you know what I mean... oHhhoo... that's hilarious

HIS HAND GOT STUCK! XD *laughs really hard*

How did Dilandau get his sleeve? Van doesn't HAVE a sleeve! This is so funny and all the background music goes perfectly with this! All I can say is that Van and Hitomi's conversation sounds a little odd... the sound qualities are so different o_o Other than that, awesome mixing, you could've used more sound effects, though.