MHP- Naruto Team Up!

[ranchan03]

FINALLY this came out, it was good harassing her to get this done, finally you all got all your lines in ^_^ i liked it

oh yea HAHAH YEA I AM HERE seeing as how i only post on criticisims and what nots ^_^ nice dub

[Crimson]

Ehh... I can't say I was particularily impressed by this clip. It was sorta average, and that makes it below my expectations for one of Maria's clip's unfortunately.
There's really nothing wrong with the mixing, though at points I could swear that the sfx seemed mixed in a little late (like when Sakura gets pissed when Naruto calls Sasuke a lazy bum).

Rika: Eh... your Naruto voice is pretty forced sounding. He does have a very difficult voice to pull off, but you just sound very unatural. It really stunts the overall effect of your lines here >_<.

Blue: Can't say much for this except that you need to work on pronounciation because you tend to slurr your words at the end of phrases. Like "dead-last" was pretty difficult to understand.

Maria: Good voice for both outer and inner Sakura, you need to work on controlling your voice when you play loud characters (like Inner Sakura), 'cause you let your voice crack and it almost obscures what you are saying (might have been partially a mic problem... it's hard to tell).

Mizura: I like your Ino voice, probably my favourite voice in this clip. You do have a couple choppy lines, where maybe it was just scripting's fault, but it sounds like you're talking too slow to work with the lip flaps which are moving much faster.

Ran-chan: Your voice fits with the character, but you seem to lack expression.

Steve Fioriello: Difficult to judge you on eating sounds alone! Haha.

Chell: I seem to be impressed by your voice a lot recently... ^^. Love your portrayal of Hinata. Your "yes" sounds unatural though.

Santa-san: I like your Iruka voice, but every time you said a Japanese name you put the stress on the wrong syllable. Also, I can't help but notice you said Sasuke Uchida... O.o It's "Uchiha..." XD.

Geez... I must be in a foul mood today.

[Kei]

Naruto: Rika - I agree with everyone else, kinda forced but it did suit him.

Sasuke: Blue - Diffenently Sasuke, it was good!

Sakura: Maria Vu - It was great for Sakura, Both Outer and Inner were greatly done.

Ino: Mizura - Thats Ino! That was great voice for Ino.

Shikamaru: Ran-chan - It was very good but not wat id expect for Shikamaru, but it suited him.

Chouji: Steve Fioriello - um.. go food o.o

Hinata: Chell - Kawaii, i love hinata it was good!

Iruka: St. Nick - Iruka was good, it suited him.

[lirifox]

It's not working for me.... >_< Really intrested to see this, though.

[StNick79]

Santa-san: I like your Iruka voice, but every time you said a Japanese name you put the stress on the wrong syllable. Also, I can't help but notice you said Sasuke Uchida... O.o It's "Uchiha..." XD.

Geez... I must be in a foul mood today.

i havent listened to this yet, dloading now. but one thing i can say is in the script i was giving it was Uchida. and sorry i'm not fluent in Japanese. i tried and Maria liked it so i dunno, take it up wit her lol. my comments later...

[Koinu]

Not working for me either. ;-;

[Crimson]

i havent listened to this yet, dloading now. but one thing i can say is in the script i was giving it was Uchida. and sorry i'm not fluent in Japanese. i tried and Maria liked it so i dunno, take it up wit her lol. my comments later...
It's not a matter of being fluent in Japanese (I know I'm certainly not), it's more retraining the way you talk to suit another language... which is easy for some people, and difficult for others. This is a sticky issue sometimes, because not everyone agrees on the same thing. I just figure, if you put the stress on the wrong syllables with English names people would laugh at you... and just hearing so many Japanese names swallowed like they were English names started to get to me after awhile.
No hard feelings, please... to you or anyone else I critiqued. Hopefully I can give you suggestions on what you can improve on. I don't mean to offend.

As for the Uchida thing... Maria made a boo-boo and didn't catch it... not your fault at all ^^;;

[TamTu]

Well, Crimson's comments are the kind we need around here. Too much "OMGTHATWASSOCOOLOMGOMGOMG" going on around here :D

I know I appreciate them.

[lirifox]

It's not a matter of being fluent in Japanese (I know I'm certainly not), it's more retraining the way you talk to suit another language... which is easy for some people, and difficult for others. This is a sticky issue sometimes, because not everyone agrees on the same thing. I just figure, if you put the stress on the wrong syllables with English names people would laugh at you... and just hearing so many Japanese names swallowed like they were English names started to get to me after awhile.
No hard feelings, please... to you or anyone else I critiqued. Hopefully I can give you suggestions on what you can improve on. I don't mean to offend.

That's something that always gets on my nerves, but I think it really depends on the name. If "Kyo" is EVER said "Kee-oh" or SAkura is said said "SaKUra" I think that's wrong, but some names just throw off things when you're speaking English fast. Since I can speak decent Japanese, I can tell you that when American's TRY to say names with Japanese sylable emphasis, it just sounds STUPID. If they can't do it, they shouldn't try, because it's even more annoying to a Japanese speaker.

[Erica]

I'm really sorry I delayed the production of this clip ^^; I've been uber busy lately x_x

Rika - O_O;; Oh the horror... Not one of my best Naruto clips >.<; I sound WAAAY too girly... I dunno what happened ;_; Heh, but I like my "Huh?"'s and stuff like that. If I could do a boy role that just had grunts as lines I would be very happy =D

Blue - You seem to have more of an accent than usual here o_o Maybe it's just me? But nice job anyway =D

Maria Vu - Awesome Sakura as always. I really like that "Love Prevails" line XD

Mizura - O_O GREAT INO!!!! *fangirl*

Ran-chan - Props for voicing my favorite character =D DUnno if I imaged that he would sound like that, but still good.

Steve Fioriello - *munch munch*

Chell - Aww... so cute and innocent XD

St. Nick - Hmmm... Very interesting take on Iruka. Your accent is a good touch =D

[Chinomi]

*ENVVVVVVVVYYYYYYYYYY*

You guys are all so great!
If I were half the VA you all were I'd have WINGS!
*doesn't make sense*

Awesome clip =D

[mizura]

I think basically all I woulda said has been said. XD;
It's been a while since I've watched the Japanese Naruto so this was interesting (me needs to finish watching the eps me have! GRR) , no real complaints on the voices and mixing was well done (cept maybe it woulda been better to redo moi lines xD so much mouth movement!)
Weee!

[Radiant Paws]

Sweet! More Naruto! After soem research, I should know who's who now.

Naruto: Always the cute/annoying boy voice I love so much.

Sasuke: Blue! Not dark as last time. Hmm...*Scratches head* Something's up...not sure what it is...

Sakura: I like her..she's cute ^^; I especially like the "dark side Sakura". "I'm the one whos gonna be with Sasuke-kun!"

Ino: Heheh. Just as cute as Sakura. Has a more "bratty" tone I guess. Like "I wonder who's gonna be with Sasuke-kun?"

Shikamaru: He's handsome! I'd go out with Shika! ^__^ So he won't be so bummed out with Sasuke.

Chouji: O_o *Munch munch* :p

Hinata: Hyuuga-chan! High, but kawaii!

Iruka-sensei: Liked him from last time ^_^


NOOO KIBA VOICE?!?!? WHAAA :_:

[Chell]

Yay! I finally can watch video clips again! So happy! This was the first I downloaded on this computer and I kept watching and watching XD. I thought it was really well done. Mizura sounds natural in voice portrayal. The other voice actors are good too. My sister said that it looked like a professional dub. ^^ She also commented the voice actors should go pro, hehe...until she heard me that is ^^; heh.

~*Chell*~

[Icypopcorn]

Rika- Hahha! What a cute voice! Sounds so... annoying (Like Naruto? XD) Great job on it! =D
Blue- the voice was good. You talk like one of those surfer dudes/skaters, if you know what I mean. I think you should just have a little more"Everyone's pathetic" kind of tone.
Maria Vu- Nice Sakura! =D I think the Inner Sakura was a little too squeaky at parts, but all in all you did a nice job =3 It's so funny!
Mizura- That's exactly how I imagined her! You did a good job with emotion, and your voice is just awesome! x3 great job!
Ran-Chan: I liked the voice you used. Just how I imagined him XD Great job!
Steve Fioriello: ... There wasn't really much to say. Nice chip crunching sounds XD
Chell- that was perfect! =D Good job sounding shy and.. Hinata-ish.
St. Nick- I liked it, but it sounds too... not quite sure what the word is. I just never imagined Iruka like that. x3 I like your voice though! It needs a little more excitment, though.

The mixing was good, I didn't see anything wrong with it. o_o but then again, I don't know much about mixing and timing and stuff. Not with dubs, anyways.

Great job on this! I loved it! =D

[lirifox]

Naruto: Rika- WAAAAH! Sugoi~ It was so perfect! I LOVED your Naruto voice.