Tima draws better with a pencil XD

[Broken Angel Tima]

Whee..


http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Image7.jpg
http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Image6.jpg
http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Image5.jpg
http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Image3.jpg
http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Image1.jpg

[YukiYuki]

The faces look awesome :D :D And I absolutely love the Sailormoon bit, the shading in it is very, very gooood.

The proportions are a bit off though, for the full body pictures but that can be easily fixed... with lots of practice. Xd (I know so, I get proportions wrong all the time ;_;) But I absolutely love what you do with the pencil... shading.. *drool*

^_^

[Hitomi]

The one with Uranus and Neptune is really realllly well drawn! I can never get profiles right...>.<"

The other pictures are awesome too, just a some problems with the proportions, but then again, proportions are so friggin' hard to draw accurately >.<" The ideas and poses are very nice tho :D Keep it up!

[katt]

Thank you for removing the first picture x_o that thing was effen huge and I had to scroll to see the whole thing (not good, because I have a big monitor).

Anyways, as other people said, work on your proportions. Though, they're not a bit off, they're VERY off. Try working with the seven heads rule (the human body is the height of seven heads of your character). Facial proportion is a off as well.

Study photographs of real people to help with the proportions. Don't study other anime/manga pictures because the problem with that is they have stylized proportions. Even if you want to develop your own style, work on realistic proportions first, then diverge into your own.

[Broken Angel Tima]

Thank you for the aid, y'all. ^^

Though, on proportions.. I know they're bad XD These are just my random sketches done for fun in a few minutes. o.o If I do anything non-realistically, they're naturally unporportioned, because I'm more used to drawing sketches of actual people.
Besides, I draw for fun, not for accuracy. ^^ I'm still trying, and have been for some years now >< I'm a slow person and I've improved a -lot- compared to how my drawing "skills" used to be.
Though Katt, I don't study other anime/manga pictures, I'm afraid, my drawing is just naturally that bad XD

The kind of images that I'm more used to would be as such:

http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Elizabeth.jpg

And even such need practise, because as I said.. ^^ I draw for fun. And, despite the fact that people kept saying I should, I'm not taking Art for college. It's nice to find some people who understand -why- XD
It's better to stick with what I'm okay at - acting, VA and writing. n.n

[Jing]

I agree. Proportions are kinda off. I really love the first image. I was like... "WOW!" Keep it up.

[Ashley Keen]

Good job! XD But the second one wasn't very work safe ^^;

[Anonymous]

:D Draw me, draw me! <3

[Ariadyne]

You're first picture was definetly the most impressive one, and I agree that there should be a warning on the second one ^^.

Well, it's obvious that you know what you're at, but you should study anatomy a bit *looks at the shrunken torsos*.

I really like the protrait-esque one you posted there a couple posts up, and if you added some shading to the face it would look quite professional.

Well, remember not to let critiques get you done, and to keep up the good work! ^^

[Broken Angel Tima]

There is shading on the face XD My scanner is an evil bint that doesn't like me.

And Danae-... o__O I mutilate my friends enough, I don't need to mutilate you too XD

Also, I personally don't think that there should be a warning .__. It's just the human body, and it's done in an artistic (crap, but still) way, no perversion intended.
Note - damn I hate that picture.

[Anonymous]

eeeee, mutilation *^^*

[Ariadyne]

The only reason why I mentioned the warning (I'm not sure about others) is because I've noticed there are people here that are like 14- yrs old ^^

[Anonymous]

Kids will see worse watching Sailor Moon. Nothing's overly graphic, so I think it's fine.

[Broken Angel Tima]

*Nods* Why should nudity offend a 14-year-old? I'm 15.

And, Danae.. I drew you. o_O But, the scanner made all of the shading non-existant, so.. XD I'm not gonna show you.

[Anonymous]

XO I WANNA SEE.

[Broken Angel Tima]

X3 I might scan it and re-shade it digitally later.

[Anonymous]

;.; now.

[Broken Angel Tima]

Okay, okay x_X *Re-scans*

Here is 'le crappy scan..

http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Danae.jpg

Here is what it looks like enhanced. (Nice, sorta, inking effect XD)

http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Danae_Freakeh.jpg

Now I'ma try re-shading..


EDIT: And now, for your entertainment XD

http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Danae_Freakeh_Shading.jpg

But, for even -more- entertainment.. I bring you, colour!

http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v192/__nana__/Danae_Freakeh2.jpg

[Anonymous]

Cool! Thanks darlin ^^

[Icypopcorn]

The first one is really nice! Alot of these are very unproportional. You're really good at drawing hair XD I like the last one, too!

[Broken Angel Tima]

No problem, Danae. ^^

Yes, yes, must work on proportions XD Or just stick to drawing random people for fun.
I do like drawing hair. o.O;