Gear Phoenix - Part Two (At Last ¬¬)

[danyata]

Look! I'm not dead!

Or at least, my computer isn't any more :D Well, lets' get the formalities out of the way:

Gear Phoenix Part Two Cast List

Amelia - Yami no Kitsune
Ellie - Swift
Ashton - Lioncourt
Shona - Ru-chan
Dallas - Lucien
Molly - Manami
Selena - Mizura

Driscol's Secretary - Saki
Ren - Lucien
Gigi - Saki
Soldier 1 - Lucien
Soldier 2 - Tom
Soldier 3 - Shadowsvoice


Music

Escaflowne the Movie - The Hurt
Slayers Great - Einburg no Musume - Kamikazari wa Neko-Gooremu
Slayers Great - Raia, Fukouno Jajimari
Escaflowne the Movie - Invasion of Torushina
X - Domino Fallout II

Download

Part One: http://www.geocities.com/danyatakai/partone.zip (4.40 mins)
Part Two: http://www.geocities.com/danyatakai/parttwo.zip (5.39 mins)
Part Three: http://www.geocities.com/danyatakai/partthree.zip (1.21 mins)

(Right Click and Save As :))

If the above links refuse to work, try from: http://www.geocities.com/danyatakai/main3.html

So why the hell did this take so long?

1. I'm lazy.
2. My PC broke. Completely.

And, despite promises from my dad to repeatidly fix it, he never did. So I had to. That was three days ago. Hooray for me!

Anyways, one scene is missing from this, where Shona takes them to the 'club' they end up in later. I cut this for two reasons:

1. I'm lazy.
2. The damn thing was just so long >.<

So yes, this is slightly better than before, this being my second attempt at mixing, but I still feel I have some work to do, but whatever, Part Two is finished! Hooray!

[Yami no Kitsune]

Ooooh! Nice job. It sounds good all together. ^_^

Mizura, sounding very evil!

[Swift]

I've only had time to download part one as of now, but I've noticed one thing major... sometimes it's hard to hear the dialouge over the music. Other than that, the acting so far is good! My mic sucked.. I'm glad it's fixed now, but I hate that I had to use it for this episode.

Will download the rest of the episode parts tomorrow, and then comment!

[Evil Guru Dood]

w00t w00t! More Gear Phoenix! Great job... *cough* I wanna join the cast... XD

[Lucien]

Things are starting to heat up here.
I love acting with Ru; she has so much energy. Very entertaining performance ^^.
Lioncourt...for the millionth time, you were great. You're always great.
Manami, got to boost those emotions hun. You sound rather disinterested.
Ellie, very nice mature sounding voice. Worked well with Lioncourt's voice.
Mizura; very confident, and dark tone. I liked it ^^.
Saki, something funny about your mic. Sounded muffled to me. Besides that, you seemed to pull off both parts well.
Tom and Shadowsvoice both did great jobs as the guards. Very convincing, and distinct.
As for the mixing, I think you're getting better. You put in more music and sfx, and it really helped. I think you could put in more though. There were scenes where things were getting intense, but there was just talking; Could have really benefited from an ominous music track.
You're deffinetly getting better. I look foward to hearing more ^^.

[Manami]

Yay! I see the improvement in the mixing, Danyata, so good job on that!

.....And...MAN... ugh. I'm sorry for being so terrible in this...uggghhhh. I WILL DO BETTER NEXT TIME...I ruined the poor beauty of everyone else x.x

Good job to everyone else :)

Overall, very good stuff, and I look forward to working on the next episode of it. (....and not being so crappy....rar)

[mizura]

Mrow!
Again i keep commenting too late to add new info. Argh.
Everyone did great, methinks. :D (Tho I think I sounded fat. XD;;;;;; Err...) I noticed some kind o' fuzzyness w/ Saki's lines though.

Over all yayness!

[Ru-chan]

Hurray for not being dead!!

I thought ALL the guys were great-- main characters, bit parts... you men were wonderful. Some of the women lacked enthusiam or had weird mic issues, but for the most part I think everyone is doing well with this.

The editing is improving, though I think there's too much space inbetween some lines. I actually liked the SFX with the gunfire being a little two loud-- I thought it added to the chaotic situation.

This is one of my favorite projects. Shona's fun and it's nice to work from scratch rather than trying to immitate a pre-existing anime character.