[KKFP] Kibou no Kaneoto 6 Mermaid Version and KODOU with Coco

[x0Michellex0]

Kibou no Kaneoto

Yayyyy! Its finally done! :D This is originally from August, but the original Hanon never turned her lines in so I asked Rayna. Thank you so much Rayna! :D


CAST:
Rina: Shika Megumi
Hanon: Rayna Black
Lucia: x0Michellex0
Coco: blablatje
Noel: Zelina
Caren: Menami

Karaoke: Provided by Zelina
Sound Effects: Sailor Moon, some ripped by mewmewzoey123, & some from my camera.
Mixing: x0Michellex0
Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h7rg-C8qiH8

Please comment/rate/critique! :D

--My Critique--
Rina: I like your Rina, but maybe a little deeper. In some places there were some pronunciation issues too, but other than that I liked it. ^^
Hanon: A little bit higher. You got the childish part down though.
Lucia: Hahaha, you suck. 8D
Coco: More emotion, and possibly a little deeper. It sounded a little high for Coco. ^^; But I love your voice. :D
Noel: Some lines were a little muffled, or you went a little slow, but other than that you were on pitch and it was good. ^_^
Caren: Your quality wasn't the greatest, but I like your Caren even if it isn't that high. It fits her. ^^

Mixing: Some parts were off {mostly where all the mermaids sang, not just the three} and the sound effects sounded funky. o.O

Overall: 4/5

KODOU with Coco

Yey! The last one of the 5 I wanted to do since August. :D Youtube cut out my effects for the atsuku's and takaku's though. T.T


CAST:
Lucia: x0Michellex0
Hanon: Rayna Black {illarae}
Rina: Zelina{OSHWebbie}
Coco: blablatje

Karaoke: Provided by Caro-chan from VAA
SFX: Sailor Moon, some ripped by mewmewzoey123
Mixing: x0Michellex0
Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F5uUdNqHrHU

Please comment/rate/critique~! :D

My Critique~
Lucia: Nya. You weren't loud enough. >o You can't hold notes either. MUHAHAHAHAHA.
Hanon: It was a little lower than Hanon's normal voice in the beginning, but by the second verse it was higher. ^-^
Rina: I like your Rina. ^^ No complaints other than a little more energy. ^^
Coco: Your first line was on the right pitch, but it slowly got higher. I love your voice though. ^^

Mixing: Random sound effects. o.O;;; Some parts sounded a little off though. Hmm~

Overall: 4/5

[YingFaStar]

Rina: Shika Megumi - This is just a quality of your singing, it's not that you slide or slur the notes, but you kind of drag the notes around, and pull them out a bit longer than they need to be. (Does that make sense o-o?) and sometimes it sounds really cool, but here it sounded messy z.z But, I do love your singing itself <3~

Hanon: Rayna Black- Phwee, I love your Hanon, this time she sounded a bit manly though o-o, work on that, otherwise, perfect!

Lucia: x0Michellex0- You sound lower too o-o But on a normal day, I like your Luchia, very sweet-souding, work on energy though, don't just blah it out, SING~

Coco: blablatje- I really like your Coco as well...okay...scratch that, I just love your singing, it's awesome. But this time, it seemed to be a bit lacking in energy. Work on that~

Noel: Zelina- In singing in character, you seemed to have lost some character.

Caren: Menami- It sounded unstable, and I didn't really see her character in it- the snobitude. Work on that. Also, your pronunciation needs to be sharpened =x Otherwise, nice~

Mixing: The "Listen to my Love" sounded really odd x.x, blend it more =3 Also, the SFX in the beginning get really repititive. Sometimes it's okay to use the same SFX but vary a bit. All I heard for a whole minute was LALALALA DING! LALALALA DING! LALALALA SING! Use some different ones in there.

4.8/5~

[Lemon Ice]

Kibou no Kaneoto

I was waiting for this song XD, okay full critque since I have nothing to do, and this was very well done I loved it!

Rina/Shika Megumi - I loved when you did 'Green Pearl Voice' you had alot of power in that phrase ^^ also what Ying said you tend to hold notes out longer than they are suposed ti be, work on ending them the same as every one else ^^ but otherwise I have no complaints with your singing pitch or tone your voice is awsome for Line/Rina

Hanon/Rayna Black - Your 'Mzuiro Pealr Voice' could have had more power, but your voice for Hanon is so cute! I really don't have any thing to critque other than that ^^

Lucia/x0Michellex0 - I think your 'Pink Pealr Voice' could have had more power in it, I have nothing else to critque about you have a awsome voice it suits Luchia very well! ^^

Coco/blablatje - I like your voice! I think that your 'Yellow Pearl Voice' could have been a little lower just a little, and your singing I would like to hear lower for coco, but you have a awsome voice I loved your performance!

Noel/Zelina - Cute voice, but I would like to hear your 'Indigo Pearl Voice' less squaky, and when you sang your solo line (the first one) your slured the ending of tha line, but your singing for Noel is amazing I don't have naything else to critque ^^

Caren/Menami - I think you could sound higher and have a little nasly sound when you do 'Purple Pearl Voice' I would also like to hear your voice HIGHER for caren you sound a little to low, judt work on that I love your voice though!

Mixing - I would have liked in the begining when the VA's say the phrase 'Pink Pearl Voice' like that, to have a echo effect a little echo effect would sound cool!, and some times in the beginging the music over powered the henshin's, I liked the sound effects you used for the begining in the henshin's it seemed very fitting for them, but like what Ying said it seemed like you just used the same one over and over again you did, but I would like to hear it mixed up more, and good job with 'Pichi Pichi Voice Live Start' all the lines went at the same time ^^ Your mixing skills are awsome not one line was off the chorus, eexcept for LISTEN TO MY LOVE, was really off, but otherwise great job!


and that's it this was awsome I would rate it 4.9/5 ^^
Kaoru

[Zelina]

Wow... These were some really old lines of mine.... I shall post my review when I get a few minutes!

[ichigo_m]

great
luchia:perficet
hannon:maby if you try to sound a little more high or even more like your normal voice.
lina:cool you sound low enough not many people can do that with out sounding like a guy.
coco:good
noel: a little flat but other wise verry nice
caren: be a tad higher and great

together:perfict harmony

all in one amazing

[x0Michellex0]

Thanks for the critiques everyone. ^^

[Shika Megumi]

Wow, this has been such a while! XD;; I'll listen right now. *0*

Luchia - More energy! I do like it though. x)
Hanon - Cute, just a tad higher though.
Rina - ZYSLA;DKFJKSLiheldtoolongattheend>_> I've heard that I was too high and too low? o-o;;
Coco - A tad too high, but you're a lovely singer. =) Also, the background noise was a just a bit distracting.
Noel - It sounds a bit muffled? But you can be every mermaid and still sound fine. =)
Karen - A bit too low as said before, and more energy! You did stay on pitch though. =)

This was mixed rather nicely, in my opinion. My only pet peeve is when they're done their transformation and the "ding". It sounds short and off. ^^;; Just blend the group singing more and we're good. =D

[Chibi-Moon]

Kawaii desu ~
Lucia - Perfect!
Rina - Deeper, and then there's Rina.
Hanon - Higher ^^
Caren - A bit higher, but your voice is good.
Noel - A bit muffled.
Coco - More emotion and a bit too high for Coco.
Mixing - Awesome!
Overall - 4/5

[Zelina]

My review! (Boo!)

Rina: Shika Megumi- I love your Rina, but I felt it was a little too low or deep on a few notes. But it was still a nice Rina!
Hanon: Rayna Black- A little too high on some parts, or too childish. But a nice Hanon overall! (as usual)
Lucia: x0Michellex0- I liked it. Some parts went low, still a nice Luchia overall! (as usual, as well!)
Coco: blablatje- I love your singing! But like many mentioned, its a little too high for Coco. I also caught the Background noise instantly.
Noel: Zelina- *Kills old Mic* Curse you! But yeah, these are oldie lines of mine.
Caren: Menami- Like everyone said, I know your Caren can go a wee bit higher! Your singing was nice as always!

[x0Michellex0]

Bumpy for KODOU~

[Chibi-Moon]

KODOU fandub critiques -
Lucia - I luff your Lucia. All you need to improve on is be louder ^^
Hanon - Just a bit more higher >.<
Rina - More expression ^^;
Coco - I luff your voice >.<
Mixing - Great!
Overall - 4/5

[Lemon Ice]

KODOU

Lucia/x0Michellex0 - Your 'Pink Pearl Voice' sounded really cute! Nice voice for Luchia, you have a awsome voice for Luchia and your energy is getting better, I can tell your going for it more! The only thing was in the begining your first solo part, work on CLEAR PRONOUNCIATION in that part it was sorta hard to tell what you were saying for that part.

Hanon/Rayna Black - On your 'Mizuiro Pearl Voice' the Mizuiro sounded muffeled in the begining, like you were slurring that word, your Hanon voice is to CUTE! I have no complaints with your singing at all, the only thing I would like to hear your voice a little more mature for Hanon ^^.

Rina/Zelina - Your 'Green Pearl Voice' sounded REALLY FORCED, be natrual when you say that line, and also when you sing for Lina you sound sorta forced as well, work on relaxing with her voice and some times your hold notes out to long, but other wise nice job!

Coco/blablatje - Your 'Yellow Pearl Voice' was right on! Your voice fits Coco ALOT! More than I can say your pronounce every thing clear, so we know what your saying that was extremly well done!

Mixing - I liked the effects you were using in the begining they sounded realy pretty, and went well with the music, but when Hanon, Lina and Luchia started their power up transformation it started sounding repetetive again, but what can you do since there arn't that many sound effects left XD, all the voice flaps were on and the chorus singing parts every one was on, but in TAKAKU or how ever you spell it sorry! XD, it sounded like Luchia and Hanon mics were turned down to low when recording or something and it made Lina's TAKAKU surprise me since the volume level was turned up

over all this was great!! 5/5!

[YingFaStar]

Rina - ZYSLA;DKFJKSLiheldtoolongattheend>_> I've heard that I was too high and too low? o-o;;


It's all opinion XD

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KODOU 4 >>

Lucia: x0Michellex0: More energy! MICHELLE *sits on Michelle's foot* (whispers: but you're improving *nod*)

Hanon: Rayna Black: Watch some of those high notes, and, I think you're pushing the "cuteness" of her voice just a tad bit, make it sound more matured rather than childish, and, well, you know I love your Hanon voice <3~

Rina: Zelina: It could've been a tad matured or lower, and you held out a lot of the notes longer than they were suppuse to be- it really stuck out =x otherwise good ^^

Coco: blablatje: A bit high. Make it lower, and have some energy into it! Otherwise, good singing 8D

Mixing: Try evening out the volume level of the singing, because you were a lot softer than everyone else 8d Also, when switching solo singers, make it more smooth cause it sounds a bit choppy. The singing itself needs more blending, I could always hear Rayna's voice over everyone else's when everyone sang together - and I could never hear you. Make it sound more like they're all one voice. Also, someone held out the note oddly long at "HAAMONIII"

4..2/5~

[x0Michellex0]

Mixing: Try evening out the volume level of the singing, because you were a lot softer than everyone else 8d Also, when switching solo singers, make it more smooth cause it sounds a bit choppy. The singing itself needs more blending, I could always hear Rayna's voice over everyone else's when everyone sang together - and I could never hear you. Make it sound more like they're all one voice. Also, someone held out the note oddly long at "HAAMONIII"

4..2/5~

I mixed with headphones, which made everything really loud. o.o;; I didn't realize until I uploaded it. xD And I'll work on that part. ^^ {The Choppiness}

[x0Michellex0]

Bump. ^-^;;;