LEGEND OF MERMAID 6 mermaid version

[Nuko]

NOTE: My WMM is being mean and some of the voices get over taken and my mixing sucks XD



CAST
Luchia:mewmewzoey123
Hanon:Sakura Shino
Rina:KawaiiTine
Karen:Zelina
Coco:Yuffiello
Noel:Zelina
Seira:Yingfastar
Sara:KawaiiTine
mimi:Mewmewzoey123
SheShe:MewOrange
Mikeru:None ;-;

I KNOW I SUCK AS LUCHIA!!!!
Mixing: Mewmewzoey123
SFX:mewmewzoey123
ok i suck at mixing to

HERE IT IS: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJ9u3n2tVOc

[KawaiiTine]

I need more energy and need to be lower at Rina i know ^^; I will give it full review later ^.~

[Nuko]

you sounded fine ^^

[Chioku]

i liked it :p

[Nuko]

Thanx im glad ya did =3

[Dcgoddess3]

Luchia:mewmewzoey123: I can tell that your inproving. Your first few talking lines like the "Im still able to sing a song line" was high enough but you went back down arround "Pink Pearl Voice" The singing I think was a little low but Its much better ^^

Hanon:Sakura Shino: That was a really great Hanon ^^ I really liked it ^^

Rina:KawaiiTine: I think it needs to be lower and more matured.

Karen:Zelina: The singing was perfect but for the speaking lines it cound be higher.

Coco:Yuffiello: That was really good ^^ Although I think the first singing was off key a bit, other than that It sounded alot like Coco.

Noel:Zelina: The first singing line seemed to be funny to me for mixing it with the music. It seemed too fast.. but you make a great Noelle!

Seira:Yingfastar: I think it could be a little higher but other than that I liked it ^^

Sara:KawaiiTine: I really like this ^^ It sounds really good ^^

mimi:Mewmewzoey123: A little too low for Mimi.

SheShe:MewOrange: Awseome-ness! You seem to fit SheShe very We'll ^^

Mixing: Its a little fuzzy. I wouldn't save it as many times in windows Movie Maker. You should mix all of the lines first and then put it in Windows Movie Maker ^^

[x0Michellex0]

Lucia:mewmewzoey123 - It was too low for Lucia. And I agree with Dcgoddess3 your first line was right, then you went down low. T_T
Hanon:Sakura Shino - One of my favorites of the clip ~<3
Rina:KawaiiTine - You needed to be a little lower and maturuer. (Is that even a word? @.@)
Karen:Zelina - No complaints. ^.^
Coco:Yuffiello - It was a little quiet, but I liked your voice. ^^ It kinda sounded like you had an accent. ^.^
Noel:Zelina - Another one of my favorites! ^.^ No complaints. =]
Seira:Yingfastar - I couldn't hear it. T_T
Sara:KawaiiTine - Awesome! I've never heard you as Sara before. ^.^
mimi:Mewmewzoey123 - It was too low, needed to be a little higher.
SheShe:MewOrange - Awesome!
Mikeru:None ;-; - T_T NO MIKERUUUUUUUUUUU


The mixing needed some work, and the Karaoke overpowered the voices 3/4ths of the time. But I loved the SFX. ^.^

Overall: 3.5/5

[YingFaStar]

YAY IT'S DONE!

Luchia:mewmewzoey123: Your speaking line could've used emotion, get mad! GRRR. A higher pitch for Luchia would've been better. And some energy! There were some off-key notes in the mix as well
Hanon:Sakura Shino: A little matured for her, but I loved her voice~
Rina:KawaiiTine: A bit gentle for Rina, but I liked it ^^
Karen:Zelina: I liked this performance best from you <3
Coco:Yuffiello: Spoken line could've used a bit more emotion, also the singing sounds tired
Noel:Zelina: Your voice cracked at the spoken line 0_o
Seira:Yingfastar: 0__o I think you amplified my line too much because it sounds muffled, eto, I mumbled this line which totally ruined the effect and it was too low =s
Sara:KawaiiTine: A little puff in there, but good
mimi:Mewmewzoey123: I suppose you can't help if you're a fill in but it could've used a voice change to fit the character more
SheShe:MewOrange: Your mic quality is quite low, and it needs a tad of maturity
Mikeru: No, don't ask Ying to help x( JK, JK X3

Mixing: At times we can hear you and sakura-shino better over everyone else when the whole group should be singing, also the karaoke's sound level goes up and down, it isn't that bad in the middle but near the beginning it really bothered me. Instead of saving it in WMM so many times, mix everything in Audacity (or whatever you use) and then apply it to the video. It takes some time but the outcome looks nicer.

I give it a 3.5/5

[Zelina]

yay its out! Shall post review soon.

[Nuko]

Thnx everyone i will work on it later =3 i might redo my lines =3 but not now at school @.@

[Nuko]

YAY IT'S DONE!

Luchia:mewmewzoey123: Your speaking line could've used emotion, get mad! GRRR. A higher pitch for Luchia would've been better. And some energy! There were some off-key notes in the mix as well

Mixing: At times we can hear you and sakura-shino better over everyone else when the whole group should be singing


Nobody sent in lines for those parts except sakurashino so it was just her & i ;-; and yer my luchia was a bit energyless ;-; told you all i dont suit luchia XD

[Nuko]

Time For My Critique

Luchia:I Agree with everyone ^^ i am to low for luchia ;-; aww well there are more fish in the sea that i can voice act =3

Hanon:Full of energy and cute nothing to complain about

Rina: A bit high at times but i still love it ^^

Karen: Very Good I liked it a lot

Noel: Nothing to complain (i sang 1 part that you didnt send in)

Coco: Very good but just you just sang a bit to slow sometimes

[sakura-shino]

Hmm....
Well, um.
A lot of people were very off key. Also, the music was wayyy too loud and seemed to drown out almost all of the voices. I found it very distracting. I really do think that you should lower that quite a bit.
You weren't so bad...you do have a very pretty voice when it doesn't sound like you're stuffed up (pronouncing p's as b's and so on) and when you're on key. To try to fix singing on key, I would reccommend recording with headphones, listening to the song with the vocal track 'removed' using adobe audition or some equivalent, this softens the character voices. Also, you should at the same time lower the volume on the song so that you can hear yourself over it IN THE HEADPHONES FROM THE MICROPHONE. Trust me, this will help a lot :3

I..really don't want to get into individual critiques at the moment ^ ^;; All I'm saying is 'it could use some work...'(and sakura-shino needs to learn to sing in head voice, cause chest voice is bad...very very bad : D and it KILLS her throat xD)

<3 sakura-shino

[Nuko]

thankies i will work on it ^^

[Jess-chan]

Ok my crit

WARNING: I'm very hard to please and I tend to be mean something ^^;;;

Luchia: Ok... well... I sorta hated all your lines. Your so low. And you sound the same ALL the time. Do you even practice? Cuz your not gonna get any better if you don't. You were also off key through the whole song. It hurted my ears :cry

Hanon: I'd have to say you've done ALOT better in the past. Cuz your singing just scared me. But I guess that's cuz Hanon sorta sings like that. I think you should stick to high and cute singing instead of low and mature.

Lina: Your "Hanon, let's sing too." was PERFECT!!! But for all your singing you were too low. ^^

Noel: I liked it! And your speaking didn't even sound like you. But as you started to sing it started to sound like you. XD But yeah I'm ranting about random things. I thought it was quite good! ^^

Coco: The only thing that seemed wrong was it was a tiny bit to high. (But I think that was only in your second singing line)

Karen: It was cute! But it seemed weird...

Seira: It sounded weird O_o and not cute like it should've been.

Sara: OMG!!! O_o Definitely not what I'd expect. It was awesome! ^^

Mimi: It needs to be higher

Sheshe: The only thing to conplain about is your mic qulity.

Mixing:
Kareoke: I didn't like it. It was one of the worst kareoke's I had ever heard and it was staticy O_o :cry
SFX: I liked the transformation ones. But the ones you ripped were horrible O_o(At least I think they were ripped)

Overall: 2/5 Sorry, it wasn't good to me ^^;;;

[Nuko]

[/QUOTE]Luchia: Ok... well... I sorta hated all your lines. Your so low. And you sound the same ALL the time. Do you even practice? Cuz your not gonna get any better if you don't. You were also off key through the whole song. It hurted my ears :cry

Mixing:
Kareoke: I didn't like it. It was one of the worst kareoke's I had ever heard and it was staticy O_o :cry
SFX: I liked the transformation ones. But the ones you ripped were horrible O_o(At least I think they were ripped)

Overall: 2/5 Sorry, it wasn't good to me ^^;;;[/QUOTE]


aww was it really that bad ;-; i shall never fandub again >< i practice so much but it just never gets better XD yer it was staticy cuz i saved the things so many times and i didnt use any of the ripped ones

[sakura-shino]

"aww was it really that bad ;-; i shall never fandub again >< i practice so much but it just never gets better XD yer it was staticy cuz i saved the things so many times and i didnt use any of the ripped ones"

Don't give up just because of that ^ ^
Keep working at it, try something OTHER than Mermaid Melody (PLEASE!!!) and if you're not sure how something sounds, send it to one of your friends (I'd be happy to help!) and if you don't know how to do something or are not sure if you're doing something correctly, ask one of your friends to help you. We're useful for more than ust critique, you know <w<
Your cast can also be a good place to turn to! They may depend on you to GIVE them the role, but just because you're a producer, doesn't mean you can't look to your cast for HELP. Just keep working at it, you'll get the hang of it eventually.
Don't let what one person says discourage you. Honestly, I do think that that crit xcould have been put into more encouraging terms. People respond better to constructive criticism than bashing. :3

<3 sakura-shino

[Nuko]

thankies Sakura-Shino ^^ *huggles* =3

[Michiru-sama]

Okay, really, lots of things for me to say...
Luchia/mewmewzoey123: I HAVE HEARD YOU SING BETTER THEN THIS!!! I did like your pitch when you talked, but it seemed like you were very sad, and not really determined/mad. When you singed... kinda low. Now, Luchia isn't very high, and ehr voice is pretty normal, and it should be the easiest voice (I think), you were kinda low. Now, being a bit low isn't bad, I think we can ignore it. Here's the feeling I got: You were trying to be high, and it gave kind of a sadistic feeling to me. Anyways, I heard you before, and you are much better then this. Or maybe you should just be Rina! Oh, and kinda off tune sometimes.

Hanon/sakura-shino: I think that was... a bit too high. Perfect for Karen, I think! Anyways, very acceptable, and pretty cute. PRetty impressive too.

Rina/KawaiTine: ...The voice was very perfect, I think. But you were a bit off tune sometimes.

Noeru/Zelina: I heard you do lots of highs. Not used to low. Anyways, kinda low for Noeru, but... pretty acceptable.

Coco/Yuffie: Yes, an accent! But I really liked your voice. And singing too.

Karen/Zelina: !!! No complaints !!!

Seira/YingFaStar: I liked it! But it was pretty muffled at the end.

Sara/KawaiiTine: PERFECTO!!!

Mimi/Mewmewzoey123: Mmm, not so cute, but acceptable

SheShe/MewOrange: Okay, a bit high, but acceptable (too). And not very good mic quality

Mikeru: NO!!!! WHY ISN'T THERE A MIKERU?!?!?!?!?! AHH!!! IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD!!!

Mixing: Actually, it's pretty good.

Most of all, I think most of you have done awy better then what you've done here. Anyways, sorry if you got offended... I'm like that ^_^

[Nuko]

Luchia/mewmewzoey123: I HAVE HEARD YOU SING BETTER THEN THIS!!! I did like your pitch when you talked, but it seemed like you were very sad, and not really determined/mad. When you singed... kinda low. Now, Luchia isn't very high, and ehr voice is pretty normal, and it should be the easiest voice (I think), you were kinda low. Now, being a bit low isn't bad, I think we can ignore it. Here's the feeling I got: You were trying to be high, and it gave kind of a sadistic feeling to me. Anyways, I heard you before, and you are much better then this. Or maybe you should just be Rina! Oh, and kinda off tune sometimes.

Well yer ^^;; everybody gets up me for not talking high enough and i cant sound mad if im high >> and its hard to sing when im trying to be high and people still get up me >.>

[Ryou Shirogane]

Luchia: Eh, I didn't think it was too low for her, actually. Your voice kinda went flat when you said "song". But you started off really well and I liked it a lot, and so did your singing, but after awhile, your singing seemed to kinda go offkey or something, and it sorta stayed that way. I think you need to just find a pitch you're comfortable at and stay there instead of forcing your voice while you're singing. It might not sound as much like Luchia, but I think it will sound better in the longrun.

Hanon: I liked your Hanon. I thought you had a lot of energy in your singing, too. ^^

Rina: Your speaking lines sounded very much like Rina, but when you were singing, your voice got higher in pitch and it sounded a little strained.

Karen: No complaints. I thought your Karen was really cute. Maybe a bit more attitude, but that's it.

Noel: I thought your singing was good. Maybe a little low, but I thought it fit.

Coco: A little different from how I usually hear her dubbed, but I liked it. Only problem was your lines were quiet.

Sara: Oh, I liked your Sara. ^^!

Seira: It sounded cute, but it was kinda muffled in there at the end so I couldn't hear it very well. ._.

Mimi: Might want to change your voice up a little more, but I thought it was okay.

SheShe: I thought your voice was a little too high. ^^; Audacity would take out mic fuzz.

Mixing: I thought the mixing was pretty good. The timing of the singing wasn't always in sync, but it wasn't bad. Some of the volume also seemed a little quiet.

[Superchibi]

Luchia: Sounded a little stuffy and was off key.
Hanon: Off key in some areas, but tone is perfect.
Rina: A little lower, and was off key but you weren't bad at all, KawaiiTine ^^
Noelle: Went off key. Needs to be a bit lower.
Coco: Off key, but voice is ok.
Karen: A little more snobbish and high pitched. Off key.
Seira: Cute. ^^
Sara: Perfect!
SheShe: More mature and low.
Mimi: More high pitched.