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Morningstarfairy
02-16-2006, 11:41 PM
yay well here's the first part of the episode yay wohoo! i hope its ok.

Cast in this
Ichigo: Haushinka
Opening Singer: Amree Takahara
Mixing: me der

thanks to Ryou Shirogane(BGM) and Kistunesqueak (song karaoke)

let me know what you think ^ ^
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=7KZ9QAQ3
http://s22.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=09KF3FTDJ4WYY0N10HKXX4703M

two ways to watch it incase one way doesn't work ^ ^

Ryou Shirogane
02-17-2006, 03:21 AM
Haushinka: I've really run out of things to comment on, since I've heard your Ichigo voice a lot lately. My only suggestion is you could have put a little more emphasis on "Let's go everyone!", or maybe added just a little variance in the weight of some lines, but the voice was good and clear, and cheerful.

Amree: *Squee* I love your singing voice so much! <3 *glomps you to death* Okay, now that that's out of my system... um... critique I thought "beating" went just a little bit *blah* at the end. The other line that seemed a little awkward, I think was "I should(?) send them all to you~". It just blurred a little at the beginning or something and wasn't as clear. Now, since I redid the lyrics to "fit" and have NO singing experience, I know they didn't fit exactly right with the melody. I think in this case you should just be aware that sometimes you have to ad-lib a little bit to make it work for you. Some people might get touchy about it, but I'm one of those people who doesn't care if people need to alter stuff. So, if you ever run across my lyrics again, feel free to reword them a little bit, mmkay? ^^; But - your singing is spectacular. I fangirled over it the first time I watched this.

Mixing/script: The quality sounded good overall, but I noticed one blip that coulda been taken out when Haushinka was speaking. There were also a few lines/words I'm generally used to hearing in the slogan, so it threw me off a little bit that this was changed. Like the "I didn't know that!" line would have filled in that moment of silence. The credits were a little hard to read in spots, but they were a nice addition. Timing was good. Overall I thought it was done well, and I'll try to get you some soud effects this weekend.

As a note: You can use programs like Virtual Dub to remove subtitles along the bottom if you wanted to.

AmreeTakahara
02-17-2006, 04:31 AM
Woah I didn't even know you posted this lol. Yeah I knew my singing needed work becuase I was a little iffy on it myself. However that was just my audition entry so yeah I shall make it better >^^<

Oh and I didn't see my name in there lol but I'm sure that you are just putting this together as a preveiw.

Man I need to redo that whole song :shock: I sang it all dead like :sweat

Zankoku no Yami
02-17-2006, 04:37 AM
Haushinka: We all know you're the perfect Ichigo so go you X3

Mixing: Great job mixing! Just... um... I think there is a line missing O.o when she is supposed to say "I didn't know that" I think that lines cute so i wanted to hear it XP

Amree: o.o so kick ass awesome!! I totally loved it X3 i have been waiting EVER since i heard the op and ed to hear it in english! So this is very nice!!! Great job ^^

Oh um... Morningstarfairy... could I possibly bother you for amree's english verson of the song? I love it lots and i kinda want it... *finger to finger* pwease?

Ryou Shirogane
02-17-2006, 05:09 AM
Woah I didn't even know you posted this lol. Yeah I knew my singing needed work becuase I was a little iffy on it myself. However that was just my audition entry so yeah I shall make it better >^^<

Oh and I didn't see my name in there lol but I'm sure that you are just putting this together as a preveiw.

Man I need to redo that whole song :shock: I sang it all dead like :sweat

Shoulda guessed she pulled another media piece from auditions. ^^;
But you still did good! >3

AmreeTakahara
02-17-2006, 05:52 AM
Thank you >^^< I even heard my voice crack once AHHHHHHHHHHHH! :sweat

Haushinka
02-17-2006, 06:01 AM
Amree: Cute singing voice! It did go off key in a couple of places but I think you have the potential to become a really great singer.

Mixing: Well, my line cut off for a while which was kind of weird...Other than that, good job.

Also, if you could send me the My Sweet Heart karaoke, I'd REALLY appreciate it >.<

AmreeTakahara
02-17-2006, 06:38 AM
Thank you for telling me that >^^< I will work hard to make the second clip better. I mean like I said that was my audition she put up there lol so I wasn't putting my best into it >^^<

Kitty
02-17-2006, 10:24 AM
Amree: Cute singing voice! It did go off key (http://216.130.188.200/cgi-bin/ezlclk.fcgi?id=9623)in a couple of places but I think you have the potential to become a really great singer.

Mixing: Well, my line cut off for a while which was kind of weird...Other than that, good job.

Also, if you could send me the My Sweet Heart karaoke, I'd REALLY appreciate it >.<

I have the TMM My Sweetheart song. ^^' I'll send it to you.

Morningstarfairy
02-17-2006, 11:24 AM
yh... i know bad Morningstarfairy using the audition song yet again! but this is a clip when i'm done the ep its going to be all at once proper lines and singing no auditions i promise *hand on heart*

Yh i know the "Ididn't know that!" line was missing, but when Haushinka sent me the line i listened to it and it wasn't there shock horror! i was sitting there thinking this could cause a confussion...

Haushinka:you really are a good Ichigo and you did really nicely in most of the slogan appart from the fact that i didn't have the line ^ ^;so if you could do this line to send it to me i would appreciate it ^ ^

Amree: i loved your singing in the audition so i mixed it with the karaoke and tried it to see if it fitted nicely and it did, it went well, but if you could re-do it for the ep so its more...well i can't really ask for more than what you did in the audition^ ^; but not so quiet in parts other than that no
complaints ^ ^

mixing: will be MUCH MUCH! better in the full ep.


As a note: You can use programs like Virtual Dub to remove subtitles along the bottom if you wanted to.

I've heard that from someone but i can't figure out how to do that ^ ^;; i have Virtual Dub but it all confussed me to the extent i had to turn it off, and that doesn't happen alot... its proabably really simple but i'm a bit ditzy so yeah, if someone could give me instructions...


Also, if you could send me the My Sweet Heart karaoke, I'd REALLY appreciate it >.<

Sure, its the one with a second verse though.. so you have to cut it down but sure i'll send it, if you still need it.


Oh um... Morningstarfairy... could I possibly bother you for amree's english verson of the song? I love it lots and i kinda want it... *finger to finger* pwease?

errr maybe you should ask Amree about that she might no be happy with me sending her singing about, but if she doesnn't mind then i don't mind sending it. if that makes sense...



Shoulda guessed she pulled another media piece from auditions. ^^; But you still did good! >3

i'm not sure if i take that harshly or as your just pointing out...lol...yh...but as i wrote earlier i will not use audition clips in my ep ^^ (cross my heart)


I have the TMM My Sweetheart song. ^^' I'll send it to you.
cool you can have it from both of us...lol...thanks Zakie ^ ^

Now i think thats all the replies...yep done and dusted... now what...

Ryou Shirogane
02-17-2006, 02:17 PM
It was meant as a joke/slight sarcasm, not to be taken harshly. ^^;;;;;;

Um... hmm... well, I know how to cut down the subtitles in the episode, but I'm not sure how to cut the video size down so the file isn't huge. I'm sure there's some setting... somewhere... So I usually convert, then put it in Movie Maker and save as a .wmv immediately, which is a much smaller size. Maybe I can figure it out.

Morningstarfairy
02-17-2006, 02:55 PM
ok, i meant how to get rid of the subtitles


It was meant as a joke/slight sarcasm, not to be taken harshly. ^^;;;;;;

>Phew< .:Sigh:. thats good..now what

sakura-shino
02-18-2006, 05:06 PM
Haushinka- You have the perfect generic anime voice, which is a good thing: especially since you seem to love taking anime rolls ^ ^

Amree Takahara- Can you say beautiful voice~?
The syllables could have abeen a little better placed, in some places you drabgged words out over many syllables and in others you tried to fit too many words in. Overall, you gave the song a real jazz feel. Excellent job!

Haushinka
02-18-2006, 09:23 PM
Thank you. XD I try.

MSF = I'll try to send you that line soon~

ChronoBall X
02-18-2006, 11:22 PM
It was meant as a joke/slight sarcasm, not to be taken harshly. ^^;;;;;;

Um... hmm... well, I know how to cut down the subtitles in the episode, but I'm not sure how to cut the video size down so the file isn't huge. I'm sure there's some setting... somewhere... So I usually convert, then put it in Movie Maker and save as a .wmv immediately, which is a much smaller size. Maybe I can figure it out.


I use a program called virtualDub to crop out the subtitles to cut down the video size. i recommend that. hope that helps ^^

Elina
02-18-2006, 11:26 PM
Actually VirtualDub, when it crops out the subtitles, for some reason makes the video size bigger... at least that's what happens to me...

networkburn
02-19-2006, 01:31 AM
OMG the singging was pretty good!
And Haushinka was preety good too!

Sophia
04-12-2006, 01:40 AM
I think Haushinka makes the perfect Ichigo, and Amree's singing was great! The way she sang the song it was the same rise and fall for the original which was also great!